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Title: thedaemon's pixel art dump
Post by: thedaemon on Wed 30/05/2018 00:49:23
Some stuff I am working on. I guess it will be an art dump thread. Crits and comments welcome.
WIP straight ahead animated walkcycle
(https://i.imgur.com/DHdgNjD.gif)
Self portrait
(https://i.imgur.com/c2Pu2gL.png)
Failed wife's self portrait. I got carried away with style.
(https://i.imgur.com/85pDpGQ.png)
sketching out a cyberpunk character
(https://i.imgur.com/Uauxc8m.png)
I am horrible at environments. Recolor in progress. Sand is new colors.
(https://i.imgur.com/Zld1IvY.png)
Title: Re: thedaemon's pixel art dump
Post by: ManicMatt on Wed 30/05/2018 08:58:02
Very different styles, I take it this isn't for the same game?

The walk cycle alien looks cool, but to me it looks like you didn't finish the rest of the walk cycle? His left leg moves forward towards the centre before going back again.

The self portrait is the best one here, nice facial details. Although the leg shading looks wrong to me. I could always reshade it to show what I mean?

The lady's upper legs are wider than her hips, is this true to your wife? I would slim those down.

The cyberpunk character is ok, could do with shading unless its intentional? I'm not a fan of these extreme side angles personally.

If a recolour is in progress, it is not fair to comment on the background as is. Feel free to share the redo! Although I will say, this lacks a lot of texture, like your dithering behind your self portrait. So far this background looks unfinished, with plain shapes and little detail. If you gave this background as much love as you did with your self portrait im confident you are capable of much better. :)