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Title: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 25/03/2019 01:48:44
Something Seeps is a psychological/body/monster horror game that will feature shocking, graphic death scenes and adult storytelling. It is based on the short story I wrote years back called Knee Deep: https://www.wattpad.com/40205418-knee-deep-short-story (https://www.wattpad.com/40205418-knee-deep-short-story). As much as I love AGS and it treated me very well for The Knobbly Crook, I've decided to rework Something Seeps in Unity. It's an engine I want to learn, so I am going to use Something Seeps as my learning project.

A father and son must come to terms with their tumultuous history, devastating family loss, and a past that will not stay buried. Memories are slippery, violent things and lying to one's self can be deadly.

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/03/SomethingSeeps3.png)

I don't have an estimate yet for the length of the game or the release plans, but I'll update as I progress. I do have a full story to tell, expanded significantly from the short story. I also have enough content in mind to do a full horror series, depending on how fast I can create.

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/03/SomethingSeeps1.jpg)

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/03/SomethingSeeps2-1024x576.jpg)

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/GnarledScarLogox3.png)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: AnasAbdin on Mon 25/03/2019 02:49:27
I could never expect less class and art from you. This is really going to be great. I can't wait. Just a little question since I'm super careful about spoilers: Is the game going to get spoiled if I read the short story?
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 25/03/2019 02:54:37
Quote from: AnasAbdin on Mon 25/03/2019 02:49:27
I could never expect less class and art from you. This is really going to be great. I can't wait. Just a little question since I'm super careful about spoilers: Is the game going to get spoiled if I read the short story?

Thank you! And yes, it will be horribly, horribly spoiled. :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: TheFrighter on Mon 25/03/2019 08:01:33

Good! After a fantasy game, an horror one is welcome!  :)

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Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: jahnocli on Mon 25/03/2019 10:36:34
That second shot is a great composition.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 25/03/2019 11:45:27
Quote from: jahnocli on Mon 25/03/2019 10:36:34
That second shot is a great composition.

Thanks! I'm going to try to push for uncomfortable horror angles throughout this one.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: rongel on Mon 25/03/2019 15:34:59
Looks great (as always)! Is this going to be a commercial game? 

Good luck with the project!
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Tue 26/03/2019 01:24:51
Quote from: rongel on Mon 25/03/2019 15:34:59
Looks great (as always)! Is this going to be a commercial game? 

Good luck with the project!

Thanks! I haven't decided what it will be yet. I'll probably charge a couple of dollars for it just so it gets treated like a "real" game by the game sites, but I have to also see what I need to do for Eidos to be OK with me doing this outside of work. I'm sure it will be fine, but sometimes contracts can be tricky.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: FireFlower on Fri 29/03/2019 11:48:33
Looks and sounds interesting! :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: shaun9991 on Fri 29/03/2019 18:12:35
This sounds right up my alley! Very cool - looking forward to playing it :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sat 30/03/2019 04:57:28
Thank you, folks! I look forward to trying to scare the crap out of you.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: milkanannan on Sat 30/03/2019 06:05:39
That style is unmistakably yours. Really looking forward to this. 8-)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sat 30/03/2019 14:41:09
Quote from: man n fist on Sat 30/03/2019 06:05:39
That style is unmistakably yours. Really looking forward to this. 8-)

It's my curse! Every one of those wood panel lines was drawn by mouse. Soooo slow. Thanks! :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Blondbraid on Mon 01/04/2019 11:54:02
I had to read the short story, and I must say it was an intriguing idea with a great and terrifying twist at the end!
Spoiler
Was it meant to be an allegory for dementia? It felt a lot like that with the old man's memories shifting and taking a life of their own.
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It will be interesting to see what you make of it in the game, the screenshots look fantastic!
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 01/04/2019 12:44:40
Quote from: Blondbraid on Mon 01/04/2019 11:54:02
Spoiler
Was it meant to be an allegory for dementia? It felt a lot like that with the old man's memories shifting and taking a life of their own.
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Yes. My biggest fear is dementia, so any horror story about people losing their grasp on reality has a bigger impact on me than something with ghosts/monsters/etc.
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Thanks! I'll be expanding on the short quite a bit, so while it will share a lot of key elements and characters, it's going to be a much bumpier road for poor Jeremy.  :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Blondbraid on Mon 01/04/2019 13:22:31
Quote from: Bavolis on Mon 01/04/2019 12:44:40
Quote from: Blondbraid on Mon 01/04/2019 11:54:02
Spoiler
Was it meant to be an allegory for dementia? It felt a lot like that with the old man's memories shifting and taking a life of their own.
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Yes. My biggest fear is dementia, so any horror story about people losing their grasp on reality has a bigger impact on me than something with ghosts/monsters/etc.
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Thanks! I'll be expanding on the short quite a bit, so while it will share a lot of key elements and characters, it's going to be a much bumpier road for poor Jeremy.  :)
Interesting to know, I think you did a great work of getting the theme across thorough the descriptions and dialogues, and I can definitively see how that could be used to great effect in a game where you get to walk around and interact with the environment!

Though I would advice that if you plan to go into more detail on the dark topics hinted at in your story, like bullying and abusive family homes, it could be nice to have a detailed content warning,
because I know people who can handle gruesome death scenes but have a hard time with more realistic psychological traumas and prefer a heads up beforehand.

Anyway, it'd be really cool to see more of the backstory for the characters and how they ended up where they were at the start of the story,
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plus it'd be exciting to explore more about what the different mementos meant to the main characters and where they came from.
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Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 01/04/2019 13:37:44
Yeah, I have plans to go a lot further with the backstory and sorting out which things have deep meaning and why. I do plan to have a content warning and you're not the first to suggest it. :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Blondbraid on Mon 01/04/2019 14:01:41
That's great to hear, I look forward to your next update! :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: The Suitor on Wed 03/04/2019 18:02:24
This is great news! I remember reading Knee Deep  years ago and loving it. You had it up on your Something Seeps site. Cant wait for this one.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Thu 04/04/2019 03:28:07
Quote from: The Suitor on Wed 03/04/2019 18:02:24
This is great news! I remember reading Knee Deep  years ago and loving it. You had it up on your Something Seeps site. Cant wait for this one.

That's been a while! If Knee Deep works out, I'll probably adapt some of the other shorts from that era as well.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Wed 24/04/2019 04:53:24
If you look closely, you can see reality being pulled into a spiral with that fence gap at the heart of it. You really don't want to go back that way. Real bad stuff back there.

(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/D446DJIW0AA_GWi.jpg)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: TheFrighter on Wed 24/04/2019 07:47:28

This stuff looks perfect for a William Hope Hodgson tale!  8-0

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Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Wed 24/04/2019 12:42:14
Quote from: TheFrighter on Wed 24/04/2019 07:47:28

This stuff looks perfect for a William Hope Hodgson tale!  8-0


It will have a heavy "book" feel to the narration, so I'm glad to hear it! :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Blondbraid on Thu 25/04/2019 20:35:16
Great atmosphere in the last screenshot, although the yellow wooden slide in the background clashes a bit with the blue tones in the area by the tree. Maybe some shadows could improve it?

Just my two cents, it still looks great.  :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Fri 26/04/2019 00:37:05
Quote from: Blondbraid on Thu 25/04/2019 20:35:16
Great atmosphere in the last screenshot, although the yellow wooden slide in the background clashes a bit with the blue tones in the area by the tree. Maybe some shadows could improve it?

Thanks! You're right - it's probably a bit *too* yellow for its place in the shadows. I'm gonna darken it.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: KyriakosCH on Fri 26/04/2019 02:01:43
Excellent art style!
I will keep an eye on this...  8-)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 24/06/2019 04:12:19
Working on the most important character in a story like this - the house!

(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/D9y505QX4AA3089.jpg)


Edit: Phase 2

(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/D91d-lPXkAEzeXD.jpg)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Stupot on Mon 24/06/2019 05:15:00
Looking amazing.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 24/06/2019 05:38:41
Quote from: Stupot on Mon 24/06/2019 05:15:00
Looking amazing.

Thanks! It's going to improve a lot when I get the background stuff in there.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: TheFrighter on Mon 24/06/2019 07:56:27

Hey, there's a scratch on the door! Those stray dogs! :-D

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Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Wiggy on Mon 24/06/2019 12:10:33
Looks marvellous! You are a genius - any proof reading or Q/A let me know.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 24/06/2019 15:10:15
Quote from: TheFrighter on Mon 24/06/2019 07:56:27
Hey, there's a scratch on the door! Those stray dogs! :-D

You may be onto something...

Quote from: Wiggy on Mon 24/06/2019 12:10:33
Looks marvellous! You are a genius - any proof reading or Q/A let me know.

Thanks! I am still  pretty far from the proofing stage, but I will remember your offer :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Mon 26/08/2019 13:36:57
Lots of structure work done with the house exterior, including the backyard abyss. Watch your step:

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/08/backofhouse.png)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Blondbraid on Tue 27/08/2019 17:12:00
Wow, that looks menacing!
It reminds me of the other world from Coraline!
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Tue 27/08/2019 23:55:39
Quote from: Blondbraid on Tue 27/08/2019 17:12:00
Wow, that looks menacing!
It reminds me of the other world from Coraline!

Funny coincidence, I also have a character would could be called an "Other Mother."
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Tue 10/09/2019 03:48:33
Working on a new Gnarled Scar logo since the last one was specific to the Knobbly Crook. This one is pure chaos and I am having way too much fun:

(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EEEe8VGWsAAhtrA?format=jpg&name=medium)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Durq on Tue 10/09/2019 04:03:46
Looking nice and grotesque, just the way I like it!
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: mkennedy on Tue 10/09/2019 13:46:50
Quote from: Bavolis on Tue 10/09/2019 03:48:33
Working on a new Gnarled Scar logo since the last one was specific to the Knobbly Crook. This one is pure chaos and I am having way too much fun:

(https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EEEe8VGWsAAhtrA?format=jpg&name=medium)

Anybody else think shoggoth from "Mountains of Madness" when seeing this?
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Tue 10/09/2019 19:48:40
Quote from: mkennedy on Tue 10/09/2019 13:46:50
Anybody else think shoggoth from "Mountains of Madness" when seeing this?

Kind of a Lovecraft/Warhammer Chaos hybrid :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sun 15/09/2019 16:07:52
Final version, but now I need to animate all the parts. Phew.

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/GnarledScarLogox3.png)

For fun, here's the original rough sketch:

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/ED84RxDX4AA2aOF.jpg)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: rongel on Sun 15/09/2019 18:00:56
That final version looks amazing! Have fun animating it! It would be great to see the animated version here too.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sun 15/09/2019 18:18:59
Quote from: rongel on Sun 15/09/2019 18:00:56
That final version looks amazing! Have fun animating it! It would be great to see the animated version here too.

Thanks! I think there's a fun/sanity balancing act with this one, which is appropriate to the subject matter. I'll likely throw it in youtube and link it here when I'm done :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Wiggy on Mon 16/09/2019 10:59:58
  A fun/sanity balancing act sounds like life, to me anyway. :-D
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sun 29/09/2019 16:33:39
Working on a style for intro/credits sequences now. The text is placeholder because I'm not obnoxious enough to put in two "game by" screens. Yet.


I used a photo of my wife as a reference for this one. Tear my wife into pieces, this is my title screen:

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/title2.png)

Incorporated the old short story book covers from the Something Seeps "universe."

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/title3.png)

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2019/09/title1.png)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: TheFrighter on Sun 29/09/2019 17:21:46
Quote from: Bavolis on Sun 29/09/2019 16:33:39

Tear my wife into pieces


Poor wife!  8-0

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Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Haggis on Fri 18/10/2019 01:17:25
Your artwork is stunning, I can't imagine how long it takes to perfect each piece without any dip in quality.

Also...
Quote from: TheFrighter on Sun 29/09/2019 17:21:46
Poor wife!  8-0

Concur!
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Thu 02/01/2020 19:28:00
Aiming to get more weird perspective shots in the scene, I realized this one caused Jeremy to look like a tiny gnome. After working in AGS for years and releasing a full game, I just now realized you could increase the scaling above 100%. Duh. I'm trying to mask the distortion a bit through a grungy window, which works pretty well, but may end up just going for a touched-up jumbo sprite set. What do you think?

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2020/01/car.png)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Matti on Fri 03/01/2020 00:42:08
It looks great!  :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Fri 03/01/2020 06:04:43
Quote from: Matti on Fri 03/01/2020 00:42:08
It looks great!  :)

Thanks! And thanks to Haggis above, too. Somehow I missed your post :)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: rongel on Fri 03/01/2020 08:44:17
Nice to see progress here, the screenshot looks good, very grungy! Definitely a horror game look.
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Cassiebsg on Fri 03/01/2020 13:54:34
I think it looks great as well, and the dirty window makes the fuzzy sprite not look weird.
If you want to touch something, I would only do the hole in the windscreen, since that one should be sharp, and not fuzzy.  ;)
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Fri 03/01/2020 18:08:33
Thanks folks! As for the hole in the windshield, I think I can live with the flaws peeping through in that one little spot :)

Although I probably *am* picky enough to consider redoing the entire sprite set for 30 pixels of visibility. No... must resist...
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Blondbraid on Fri 03/01/2020 23:23:37
I'll add to the choir and say it looks good, it reminds me of old classic horror games!
Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sat 15/05/2021 02:29:03
Behold, the darkest thread necromancy at the end of a year's worth of plague! I apologize for the lack of updates, but after I did the Knobbly Crook patch/additions, I wasn't sure where I'd go next and I had to convince myself I really wanted to go back to this one. As you can see, I switched Something Seeps over to Unity/Adventure Creator, both because I wanted to learn the tools for other potential projects down the road and I wanted to work in much higher resolutions with a lot more parallax scrolling and fog.

It does seem like I'll still be working in AGS in some form because my daughter wants to start up a new game project of her own and I promised to help teach her my awful way of coding and shameful hackery.

Here's a new HD screenshot! I've already reworked several of the previous rooms and sprites into 1080 hd, but this is a new one.

(http://www.gnarledscar.com/wp-content/uploads/2021/05/Blades.png)

The following video shows how it now looks in motion, but there is a bit of EXTREME GORE at the end. Something Seeps will celebrate killing you in many horrible ways, but it will not result in Game Over screens.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38dMt8g8TwY (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=38dMt8g8TwY)

Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: TheFrighter on Sat 15/05/2021 08:34:24

This could fits a Clive Barker tale!   8-0
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Title: Re: Something Seeps
Post by: Bavolis on Sat 15/05/2021 15:23:02
Quote from: TheFrighter on Sat 15/05/2021 08:34:24

This could fits a Clive Barker tale!   8-0


Definitely an influence of mine!