Naughtyness

Chicky · Wed 21/04/2004 22:52:42

hey hoe.. i mean ho

ive got a pic ot show ya, its very rude and contains nudity soo no kids!

http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v54/oversizedchicken/Pr0n.gif

it was drawin in flash, and exported to bmp then converted in psp to gif. why? because flash4 exports crappy gifs.

can i get some c+c, i know it needs bg, for te record her legs are meant ot be hanging over bedposts.

hehe

-OSC

*edit* dont worry, i wont put it in my sig

YOke · Wed 21/04/2004 22:57:24

Schweet!!! Naughty, but sweet!
I need two seconds to...gather my thoughts ...yeah that's it ...gather my thoughts... then i'll c&c... mmmmmm....

Chicky · Wed 21/04/2004 23:00:41

hey, i just realised, her right tit is bigger than the other!!!!

oops. thanx for the quick reply YoKe, have fun ... errr... gathering thoughts.

-OSC

Domino · Thu 22/04/2004 00:29:16

She looks like she's having alot of fun. Is she ********* herself?

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m0ds · Thu 22/04/2004 00:37:13

Nice.

But it is quite blatently an attempt to draw porn, rather than draw a nude-female. :

Crit wise, there's something not quite right about her left leg (the one on the right as you look at it), I'm not sure what. Her right leg looks fine. I think one is thinner than the other.

kaaZ · Thu 22/04/2004 01:18:58

agree with mods....Take some 'simple nudes' as ref instead of porn...as for the pic...not bad...Not to keen on the head though...probably b/c her chin looks asif smacked with a hammer from the right...her right hand looks strange aswell...

InCreator · Thu 22/04/2004 03:29:48

her head looks bit unnatural and I'd pay more attention to hair!
but OSC, why are you drawing pr0n?

sedriss · Thu 22/04/2004 13:47:02

Why not?

Haddas · Thu 22/04/2004 15:53:17

I personally would like to know a guy who draws pr0n. Maybe you'll start up a page at wwoec someday!

Chicky · Thu 22/04/2004 15:55:59

my point adzactly Sedriss.

nah, i was learning the art of drawing the female body, and i thought to myself ... whats the best way of drawing posture/positions, well drawing them in awkward positions. And guess what came to mind.

ohh, and also a friend wanted me to draw it for her.

okies, thanks for the ~~clit~~ crit. I'll fix it up and post the edit.

-OSC

stuh505 · Thu 22/04/2004 16:57:23

no offense but i don't really think you need to share your personal pornography with us...i don't think this is very artistic, and i don't think this is going to be an effective way for you to learn to draw the female body. you didn't even seem to focus on her form, as evidenced by the lack of proportion in her breasts, thighs, etc. if you want to learn the female form better I suggest

a) draw larger
b) attempt more detail
c) sketch by pencil; it is very easy to assess artistic progress and problems from a pencil sketch...and adding in the complexity of using flash or some other computer program is not going to speed up your learning curve
d) find an artist who can do pencil sketches that you admire and try to copy some of his work...you will notice little tricks about how to draw certain parts that you will not forget
e) you don't need to focus on interesting poses. the most basic poses are the most difficult anyway...when you attempt a more contorted, complex, or less natural scene, your work will tend to look better but not because you're drawing better, because our eyes aren't as ocustomed (sp?) to looking at it and we don't notice the flaws as quickly

Chicky · Thu 22/04/2004 18:29:33

ok so you got some nice tips there but theres no need to be soo harsh,

"you didn't even seem to focus on her form, as evidenced by the lack of proportion in her breasts, thighs, etc"

i was bored and having a laugh, hell atleast some people apreciated it. If you were not interested in the whole pornography. that why go to the link clearly labled pr0n?

-OSC

InCreator · Thu 22/04/2004 20:34:34

QuoteIf you were not interested in the whole pornography. that why go to the link clearly labled pr0n?

Excellent point, OSC

Quotec) sketch by pencil; it is very...

...And don't remember to isolate yourself from other people during that. Or they may get wrong thoughts about you.

Quoteb) attempt more detail

Hmm.... $:-\$

Quotea) draw larger

Second "hmm...."

Miez · Thu 22/04/2004 21:40:37

Quote from: m0ds on Thu 22/04/2004 00:37:13
But it is quite blatently an attempt to draw porn, rather than draw a nude-female.

There is a difference?

m0ds · Thu 22/04/2004 22:04:22

QuoteThere is a difference?

Well I'd try mastering drawing a nude posing female rather than a masturbating one first, you randy so and so.

Evil · Fri 23/04/2004 00:20:12

Its good, however I think you're pushing the limits of porn and art. Its great art wise but not the most appropriate thing in the world.

stuh505 · Fri 23/04/2004 02:32:04

Quote from: OSC on Thu 22/04/2004 18:29:33
ok so you got some nice tips there but theres no need to be soo harsh,

"you didn't even seem to focus on her form, as evidenced by the lack of proportion in her breasts, thighs, etc"

i was bored and having a laugh, hell atleast some people apreciated it. If you were not interested in the whole pornography. that why go to the link clearly labled pr0n?

-OSC

Your first post said that you were trying to do sexual art. Since it was in the AGS critics lounge I assumed it was for your game somehow. I am not offended by porn and I like sexual art. Then I clicked on the link and saw that it was more like your horny doodling that didn't have anything to do with AGS, and not really anything to do with art either. I was not offended, more like, dissappointed. I just think you chose the wrong section to post in....it would be better off in like the off topic or something...

InCreator · Fri 23/04/2004 03:55:31

QuoteI just think you chose the wrong section to post in....it would be better off in like the off topic or something...

I feel a bit strange and I ...agree! I think that at General Discussion you may find alot better audience and opinions, because the way people take this thread is somewhat different. It's not "Please give me fair critics on my attempt to draw anatomy of female body" but more like a "hey, I drew a girl playing with... what do you think?"
Or something like that. CL is supposed to be more serious place and this pic cannot be taken very seriously, I think. At least, not here.

stuh505 · Fri 23/04/2004 04:01:25

hey OSC,

where'd you hear about Muse?

they changed my life

LordHart · Fri 23/04/2004 05:12:49

Mmmm... pr0n...

Now it just needs to be animated!