Animation help -- Now with added background

[Cameron] · Sun 27/06/2004 05:38:49

Can you see anything wrong with this? Please tell me, redo's welcome.

--EDIT--
Now I have a bg, crits and paintovers welcome. Now wider door.

Mr_Frisby · Sun 27/06/2004 06:53:34

Do you mean phisically or morally?
Because if you mean it morally - there should be brains sliding out the back of his head.

(but seriously it looks good - but his shoulders should roll too - like a wave going through his body, atleast thats what happened the last time I shot someone in the head.)

[Cameron] · Sun 27/06/2004 07:02:01

I tried moving shoulders but i couldn't get it to look real (No source material of someone getting shot being the downfall)

Evil · Sun 27/06/2004 08:00:54

No dramatic fly back? :O

[Cameron] · Sun 27/06/2004 08:03:58

You pic isn't working. No dramatic flyback as im not very good at animating. Im taking it one step at a time.

Mr Jake · Sun 27/06/2004 08:25:19

also... should he be blinking after, I assume, he was shot in the head?

[Cameron] · Sun 27/06/2004 08:35:24

He can blink after being shot because he is my invincible animation test dude.

Mr Jake · Sun 27/06/2004 08:36:23

ok

I understand now

[Cameron] · Sun 27/06/2004 08:37:01

Do you have any problems with the bg?

Mr Jake · Sun 27/06/2004 08:42:33

The door on the bank seems a little thin for its height and the tree would use some detail such as leaves and cracks in the bark, but other then that nope..

[Cameron] · Sun 27/06/2004 08:45:33

The door i can fix but i cant draw trees. Paintover welocome, hint hint.

Mr Jake · Sun 27/06/2004 09:08:35

maybe later

but Im not very good anyway

Mr_Frisby · Mon 28/06/2004 01:20:39

The windows need window jams (if such things exist)
and your tree is biologically incorrect - the canopy is too small for it's height and it needs some limbs man. Also the trunk looks a little watery (seethru) make the trunk abit darker.

Penguinx · Tue 29/06/2004 22:34:11

I did a quick paint-over of your head-shot guy. I didn't want to redraw the whole thing and add recoil, so I added a bit more goo hanging from the back of his head. I wanted to edit it, not reinterpret it.

a few measley pixels were added to the back of his head, only. The style of the character is nice and clean. Cool beans.

If you'd like some help in the animatin' department, I'd suggest Richard Willaim's Animators Survival Kit.

Pic:

Miez · Wed 30/06/2004 00:14:18

Quote from: PreparaciÃ³n De Ensalada on Sun 27/06/2004 08:35:24
He can blink after being shot because he is my invincible animation test dude.

I think the arterial spray should start sooner ... not after he loses his head. Nice animation though.

Haddas · Wed 30/06/2004 00:51:58

make it wait a few seconds instead before starting