Need C&C for walkcycle

Started by Jimi, Sat 10/07/2004 20:05:32

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Jimi

I've just finished this forward walkcycle, could you give me some c+c please? I used erics template as a guide  ;D



Thanks, Jim.

Peefy

Awesome animation!
After looking a while to see if I could find something to complain on, I found something.
His legs seems flat on the sides or bottom in some of the frames, probably because the image size were to small or something..I guess >_>

NaStY_FrEaK

Really Great! ;D
Thought there is no what to critique ,but there is.
I think that his hair should also move upside down,because of his hairstyle.

Jimi

Peefy, could you elaborate on that please?  :D

Peefy

Forget it, only me beeing way to tired to think, sorry.
It's awesome =D

BerserkerTails

It's good. Nice use of Eric's template.
I make music.

strazer

The black line between his upper arm and the torso suddenly skips inward one pixel in one of the frames (and the one for the other side).

Phemar


I noticed an error, it's not your fault as it was in Eric's too.
The legs go back, the kinda snap forward, this is prolly for a reason, but i don't feel like thinking 'cos Frasiers coming on now.
Cheers

Renal Shutdown

I'm with strazer, here.  It looks like he has very small but very wobbly breasts.
"Don't get defensive, since you have nothing with which to defend yourself." - DaveGilbert

Jimi

lol. He's been letting himself go lately  ;) . I'll try and fix that. Thanks.

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