Some song I'm working

[Candle]

I need a few more things I want to add but wanted to get some input on it before I'm done with it .
http://sr1.mytempdir.com/11455
Ogg file,But  I have an mp3 too if you need that to listen to it .

[Peter Thomas]

It sounds pretty good to me, although 6 seconds doesn't really allow for a lot of crit. There's no melody/harmony, obviously, so you probably want to make it longer so you have time to put more into it.

For what it is, though (it's almost a sound effect), it's fine.

[Candle]

Yes I want to make it longer and add some more stuff to it so it will sound like a real song .
Don't worry about the other person ..

[Gregjazz]

I'll be humming that one all day.