C&C on guys, new one added.

[Mozesh]

I was bored, so I made this:



What do you think?
(I might make a game with this kind of style.)

[x_traveler_x]

It's a really good looking sprite.Ã,  I would lengthen the legs, broaden his left shoulder a little, maybe add some definition to the torso area.Ã,  I'm not sure about the flat-footed stance.Ã,  Other than that, I like it!

[skw]

Yes, Traveler 've already said everything that I would say, so I'm only adding... First, the pistol and trousers... look a bit weird (as for me) and definitely need some details. The same for the whole character, try shading him a little / add some details to face and "wrinkles" to the clothes. I like it, but it seems incomplete yet.

Anyway, good luck with it!

[der.uwe]

keanu reeves, ha?

[skw]

keanu reeves, ha?

Hah... I bet he's Redr... sorry, Mozesh himself!

[Mozesh]

Lol nope he's not supposed to look like someone in particular

Redr... sorry, Mozesh

I had to change my name so I wouldn't be confused with Rui "Brisby" Pires
So if anyone has a suggestion for a new name plz share it with me

[He-Man]

Looks great. It's a very nice style for a game.
Some shading might make him even better...

[skw]

I had to change my name so I wouldn't be confused with Rui "Brisby" Pires

So I thought.

Redrum -> Murder.

By the way, what does Mozesh mean? Is it yer name?

[Mozesh]

Voila, I've added some shading & stuff.

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By the way, what does Mozesh mean? Is it yer name?

Nope , I just thought it up.

[Babar]

Nice sprite! I can just imagine the guy knocking on the inside of the computer screen with his gun. Perhaps you can make his pants looser? They look pretty tight now.

[Redwall]

The gun looks twisted. Shouldn't we be seeing the bottom of the barrel?

[=The=Brat=]

i know its a normal thing but his crotch is just...just        

[Mozesh]

Modified it again:



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EDIT!!!!!:
Here's an animation of him drawing his gun.

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And one with a crappy kind of motion blur:

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C&C please

[Haddas]

The gun should be even bigger for added effect.  also, the way he pulls it out now his pants shoud snap and fall down

[Intoxicatedowl8]

I think you messed it up a little bit.

The tail of his jacket is messed up around the end of the animation, on both sides.

[Mozesh]

I've made something new, but I'm not happy with it yet:

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EDIT:
Heres the same one, (the frames have the same delay now.)

[skw]

Um... it's weird. He's too static as for a men, who just getting his gun out and aiming somebody at the one moment. Draw a sketch first, then make some details... and search this forum narrowly, MrColossal has once posted a good firing animation sketch somewhere at this board.

[Mozesh]

I will do that, I focused more on the arms then the rest.

[Gord10]

Yes, I think he looks static, too. Some other parts of his body should have moved.

[MarVelo]

It looks like the gun sort of just becomes from the black space under his coat.