Something Beatboxish

Started by Mozesh, Wed 15/06/2005 21:42:36

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Mozesh

Hey guys I was bored so I made something for my starting Beatbox career :P

Not AGS related but just trying to improve my art.

Babar

what is beatbox?
Nice work. The hand looks weird to me though. Like it is too close to his face, and belongs to someone else
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ildu

Beatboxing is making sounds with your mouth that act as beats to mc on.

InCreator

Not bad!

I'd point out some areas in need of more interest:

* right ear (somewhat weird  :-\)
* overall shading color. The pic should look much better if shading was stronger (more contrasty)
* right eye. It seems a bit too small, the face isn't angled that much
* Usage of line tool! Try using more curves and less straight lines. Especially when doing hair...

The title name looks excellent. But blue letters on background give a headache of smaller sort.


Babar

oops...forget what I said about the mike being too close to his face then
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