Teenage girl picture

[Uku]

Either way, I just want it fixed. xD

fixed what?

anyway i made minor adjustments to this girl.(realy minor)

i made other leg a bit taller, hand-in-pocket-thing, and the placewhere legs star that pixel was on wrong sidre(cant explayn, look differences.)

[Grapefruitologist]

Ok, thanks, that does look better.
And Tuomos...I still don't get what you were saying... jean jacket and jeans with little holes in it? Isn't that what everybody are always talking about and stuff, like "teens are always wearing jeans with holes in it and it looks so bad" and stuff. The basic teen stereotype...
But, er, yes, this is the other character. This is supposed to be Kyle, Hailey's ex-boyfriend...

(The legs are like that too, because I used the same picture as Hailey to draw Kyle, I just draw over them.)
Which one is better?

[DoorKnobHandle]

Here's a paintover that I did in 5 minutes:


21 colors + background color

- Changed colors.
- Made her a little thinner.
- Got rid of black outlines.
- Added simple shading.

If you spent more time on it, you can really make it look better!

[Corey]

I turned her into this... mostly to improve my own art. thought it might help you anyway

[Grapefruitologist]

To be completely honest... I don't really like the paintover you did. (dkh's) It looks good art-wise, but I don't think it fits her personality. Not yet, anyway.
(Um... and yeah... Corey, I don't really like yours either... sorry)
Remember in the Secret of Monkey Island, Guybrush Threepwood looked like a "flooring inspector", but then in the second Monkey Island, he looked like a real pirate? Well, it's sorta similiar here. I'm acctually already planning to make a sequel (yep, I know that sounds weird, but I thought of the first game and the sequel to it at almost the exact same time) and in the first one, she's supposed to be the kind of mischievious 50% tomboy outcast, but in the second one, she's supposed to be the popular and snooty type...
Well, I'm not going to make her look like that yet, but in the second one, yes, that would definately work. In the first one, though; she's only going to be in it for like 20 seconds, and for the rest of the game it'll be her in her ex-boyfriends body, (they switch bodies) so it wouldn't matter much anyway.
Just so you know, in the second one, they are back in their own bodies and Hailey gets abducted by aliens, because the aliens were bribed by Kyle to bring her to him because he changed his mind and wants her back... so, you'd see Hailey alot more then.
It IS okay if I use your paintover in the second game, right? (I'm pretty new at AGS, so I don't really know... about anything, heh)
Oh... and by the way Corey... I keep forgetting to thank you for shrinking the room, so thanks. =)

[Corey]

np, thats a nice and wicked story you got there  anyway... I mostly did that "paint over" to improve my own art on characters. Still I posted it coz i got the arm out of her pocket and thought that might be what u needed or something  .

good luck with your game and chars