Some Music

[PsychicHeart]

Mkay, so here's a little piece i've been working on.
Skulls
Crits and comments welcome and appreciated.

[Nikolas]

I'm sorry fluke but there's nothing to critic this time really...  :'(

What you did is to come up with 1 melody of 4-5 secs and repeat it 4 times, with a tiny change in the end.

You didn't use many instruments (only two)
You didn't make any changes
It appears that you didn't really try.

It's not a bad melody for a start, but there is nothing else to say really... sorry that I can't say anything else :-/

[PsychicHeart]

Yeah, about that.
I realise there isn't not much variety.
It's mainly been developed for background to a live song, with guitars and drums and whatnot.
So, with this knowledge, crit away.

[[Cameron]]

Ehm, There still isn't anything to crit. For reasons Nik pointed out. Perhaps if we could hear the live song in front of it we could crit its effectiveness and the like. But right now, you havent even said what kind of sound you were going for.

[ManicMatt]

Yeah, I wouldn't even say they're good notes you used either. It sounds like you randomly chose any old notes, especially at the end, sorry. Because you loop it, the last note is the same as the first note, which really doesn't work.

Keep the beat, but well.. what they said.

I know you're capable of better.