Calling French speaking community

[Tuomas]

Hi there. I wasn't sure if I should post this to critics lounge, but I thought, since it's not open for most to C&C and the main point is not to get them. All I really want is that, some who have read more French than the 2 courses I have, would perhaps check if it's totally awful, or most importantly full of errors. I know my grammar isn't the best there is, but anyway. The point is, I wrote a song, a 3/4 waltz and wrote something from my mind. It might sound very naive and all, and I know that, so don't be afraid of telling my to throw it away After all, it's only a song, and I've got so many more waiting! So here it is doe a spellcheck:

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/tu_es_mon_favori_tout_le_monde.doc

Cheers

[paolo]

I'll PM you my comments.