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Started by Estaog, Sun 04/07/2004 14:06:45

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Estaog

What do you think of my agent? Notice how he has no hand, i didnt have any idea on hor to draw it.I am quite proud of the armour.Hands kindly axcepted.
Think about the kittens man!

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MrColossal

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are you asking me to delete this topic?

otherwise i really like him, his square head is nice and thick body is really good looking.

also i suggest maybe you could push his legs back a touch so that he looks like he's standing better

or bring his body forward a bit

know what i mean?
"This must be a good time to live in, since Eric bothers to stay here at all"-CJ also: ACHTUNG FRANZ!

Chicky

Is that your first try at your OWN sprite Tanker?

I think it has a nice style, reminds me of rodekill. I would suggest at making the "armour" more armour looking, because if you had not said i would have thought he was just wearing a t-shirt. Maybe you could make it look like it raises ablve his body more, at the moment it looks very tight. Also try fixing the double pixels that are dotted around.

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-nath

Renal Shutdown

Good first attempt, but like Eric, I'd suggest working on the body shape a bit.
The following is a rather poorly drawn try at hands and armor.

I like the beefy, action man on steriods feel to him, tho.
"Don't get defensive, since you have nothing with which to defend yourself." - DaveGilbert

switcharoo

The arm with the hand missing is a lot bigger (more muscular) than his left arm. Also it looks a little like his head is stiched on beacuse there is a "seam" around his neck.

And ditto for all the suggestions so far. Cool looking charater, just needs some work (and a nose maybe :P)

Estaog

Think about the kittens man!

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