cave room needs critics

[mousemat]

Hi
I have been practicing drawing my background and i think i am getting better.
here is a cave i drew .


Redrawing welcome

[Krazy]

What are all those white croses about?

[Gilbert]

I think they're reflected lights, but they indeed looked like aim targets, I'll say make them smaller, or just observe:
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to see how other people drew them.

[Andail]

I couldn't tell what anything in that picture is, let alone the cross-hairs.

I don't know what to say, really. At your age, children normally don't have their art-work criticised.

The recommended age of this forum is 16, and you still have three years of training before you offically merit the feedback of other members. Based on this, I would actually say this thread isn't legitimate.
Sad but true.

[Sam.]

is this some kind of joke? this looks like somehting my four year old cousin would scoff at. Im sorry mousemat ut actually put some effort in before posting on this board. I have no idea what anything is in this picture i can't help you.

[Andail]

woops, I was gonna lock it, but forgot.
Mousemat; again, train for some three years or so and come back. I'm sure you'll be a kick-ass artist by then.