Some storys for C+C sci-fi, horror, fantasy[edit]

[lo_res_man]

hello fellow agsers, i wrote some stories recently, and I wondered what you thought. I posted them on elfwood, hoping for some c+c, but no dice. I wondered what you people thought.


Here they are!

"only" is the first part of a nearly abandoned story of an elf-orc,

"Dead Soldiers" is aÃ,  story of a soldier who decends into madness

"Monks shame" is a badly writen piece about the transformation of an unsuspecting monk.

Please tell me what you think, I can't improve without feedback.