Author Topic: Haiku maybe help? (now also with limerics!) (Read 77239 times)

Las Naranjas · « **Reply #40 on:** 09 Jan 2003, 23:51 »

Mr C can see
that niggaz haiku as well
haiku of ghetto

Fuzzpilz · « **Reply #41 on:** 09 Jan 2003, 23:52 »

CJ: Irony.
Mocking faults, I erred myself.
How embarrassing.

Esseb · « **Reply #42 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:01 »

Now now kids, don't fight,
or the Colossal Eric,
will sit on your head

MrColossal · « **Reply #43 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:06 »

you spelled my name wrong
do it one more time and i
will sit on your head

i edit haiku
back from the dead like rode kill
so just chill back, yo

my haikus be phat
my syllables add up tight
don't freak with my flow

oh how my style flows
oozes into your carpet
you need Oxy-Clean

gonna rock the mic
leave the haiku wanting more
MC Zombie love

Antidisestab
lishmentarianism
chill back wit' dat shit

don't try to follow
all my haikus be mad tight
tight like your mom, kid

Esseb · « **Reply #44 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:09 »

Look, look what I did.
Edited my post wrong it seems.
Now Eric, who's the fool?

Esseb · « **Reply #45 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:11 »

This is ironic.
I didn't follow the rules.
Go ahead, sit down

Las Naranjas · « **Reply #46 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:14 »

Esseb is a fool
For none but a fool commits
crime of double post

Scummbuddy · « **Reply #47 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:47 »

Chris weeps with sadness
For now he pays more money
With each double post

Poor house he lives in
No updates for AGS
Community Death

Las Naranjas · « **Reply #48 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 00:57 »

lads I'm rejoicing
Robert Redford has returned
third part downloading

evenwolf · « **Reply #49 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 01:10 »

Let the children keep
On and on with the rhythm
My heart swells with joy

Haiku brings the peace
To the forum once again
People's words mean more

"People's words mean more"
Ha ha, looks like I said 'swords'
Indeed, I like swords

Imagine Haiku
In ads for Monkey Island
More people would buy

Somewhere deep in the
Caribbean, a young man
Becomes a pirate

A hypocrite be
Las Naranjas, who corrects
While himself erring

Trapezoid · « **Reply #50 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 01:40 »

I am bored by this...
I invent a new format.
I call it "Fahkyu"

It starts with a ten syllable sentence.
The next line's one syllable shorter.
And so on until you reach 1.
It's longer than a haiku.
Ergo, more expressive.
Unless you're stalling.
To reach the end.
Almost there...
Ready...!
There.

m0ds · « **Reply #51 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 02:35 »

heh, this stuff sucks ass
five seven five my fat ass
look guys i made one!

m0ds

m0ds · « **Reply #52 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 02:41 »

i await mittens
because it will be most fun
or just f**king shit

sorry, pardon me
my potty mouth prevailed
i think i'll drink milk

that will wash it out
all those naughty naughty words
like mother f**ker

oops did it again!
you are probably not pleased
i cannot help it!

i'm just a poor boy!
i'm from a poor family!
he's just a poor boy

from poor family
sorry i'll stop singing queen
because its night time

and now off to bed
where i can have lots of fun
oh, and masturbate

m0ds

Scummbuddy · « **Reply #53 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 03:04 »

Who uses ten syllables? That's stupid.
I do like my hiakus like my forums
to Conform and be distracting.
This silliness has to stop
A hiaku is better
Then what you made up
What did you say?
A Fahkyu?
Bless you
Thanks

Las Naranjas · « **Reply #54 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 04:52 »

Evenwolf above
Obsessed with phallus of swords
has been himself fooled

and pity the foo
who abandons perfect form
for kitcsch novelty

you are now disgraced
keep the celestial form
as heaven mandates

Trapezoid · « **Reply #55 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 05:04 »

Making a seven-
teen syllable sentance and
splitting it's cheating.

What is more graceful?
How about seperate lines?
No random splits here.

Speaking of splitting,
It's time for my ballet class.
I must be off. Ciao.

Oh, just one more thing...
Haiku is Japan's finest
(cartoon pr0n aside)

Helm · « **Reply #56 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 05:09 »

This I think is neat,
A cool thread to remember,
But needs more volume

Las Naranjas · « **Reply #57 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 05:13 »

Helm's haiku echo's
Eurotrash Dj's haiku
all dance and volume

yet I will make thanks
for it has shed light for me
on haiku dance mix.

Helm · « **Reply #58 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 05:22 »

Ha ha ha ha ha,
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha,
That was funny Oranges.

evenwolf · « **Reply #59 on:** 10 Jan 2003, 07:23 »

We can dance if we
Want to, Leave our friends behind
Like Las, who sucks balls

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