Critic on tunes

[Bror_Jon]

http://www.qfpost.com/download.do?get=169a5b1febe6e0043af417df68e91571

http://www.qfpost.com/download.do?get=a7f44cd68796ad60fb14d960906d0809

Hope you guys can listen to the tunes and tell me what you think.

Thanks in advance.

[Bror_Jon]

bump 

[Anian]

Bump? Bump you say!?  

First track has a strange transition at about 00:19, seem like the sound gets distorted and I'd maybe try turning down the volume of the bass line (the instrument that doesn't sound like the piano) cause I think it's sounds a bit too crowded.
Also, I don't what you're gonna use this for, but it doesn't loop very well.

The gerjpryl, I like the part that starts at about 01:00 mark, though personally the whole tune is kind of too high pitched for my taste, still, not bad at all.

Again, not much help, but at least I saw the bump.

[Bror_Jon]

Again, not much help, but at least I saw the bump.

Good help though. Thanks. 

ps: the first isn't meant to loop.