Fortnightly Writing Competition - Wafts of Mist (Results)

[JudasFm]

I espescilly liked that, while a reader should pick up on the fact that Clara is a ghost or some kind of supernatural being, it is not entirely clear whether she is good or evil.

Dang it! I knew there was something else I meant to mention! Votes notwithstanding, I agree; that was a very good touch on Blondbraid's part

[Blondbraid]

I espescilly liked that, while a reader should pick up on the fact that Clara is a ghost or some kind of supernatural being, it is not entirely clear whether she is good or evil.

Dang it! I knew there was something else I meant to mention! Votes notwithstanding, I agree; that was a very good touch on Blondbraid's part

Great to hear that you liked my story! The fun thing is, that aspect was rather incidental, as I was trying to finish the story before the deadline and didn't get time to elaborate more on the characters. All in all, I'm happy it turned out good and I wish to congratulate Baron, it will be fun to see what's the next theme will be!

[Baron]

Thanks for all the votes, folks!  I have to agree with Sinitrena's assessment that my story just kinda petered out in the end.   I just ran out of time and couldn't kill my character off in an appropriately gruesome manner....   Great work, Blondbraid!  Hope to see you out next time (seeing as how I can't participate.... at least we'd get one entry ). 

New topic up soon!