The Execution of Anne Boleyn [MAGS September]

Started by Riaise, Sat 30/09/2017 15:26:49

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Mandle

@Riaise: Okay, pretty much what I thought

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Maybe even a small comment of hers like "Sigh... here I go again dealing with the long-ago issues of long-ago dead people..." or something even better written than that near the start of the game could make her mood more transparent to the player... I kind of thought she was being a bit of a dick at the end talking about trying out more wives while Henry's current wife lay dying in his arms, but if the player understands that she said that because she is jaded by the inevitability (sometimes?) of history then it could maybe be viewed by more players as the very darkly funny moment that it is supposed to be?
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Riaise

Yeah, I did want to put something like that in, but I couldn't find the right place for it and I was running out of time anyway so I left it as is rather than try and shove in a line where it doesn't fit. I'll look into it again and add something after MAGS voting has ended. :)

selmiak


Riaise

Thanks so much, selmiak! I'm glad you liked it! ;-D

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