Babies first walk cycle, looking for criticism?

Started by CherishKuddleMonster, Mon 04/06/2018 23:19:03

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CherishKuddleMonster

Not sure how to remove this post, I'm going to redo the entire thing.

Thanks for replies.

Click'd

To me it looks like she doesn't have a neck, that the face goes too far down.

Sidenote: You could make a gif with Licecap instead of a movie with whatever you used. Might put less of a strain on your system.

Stupot

The lines are so thin I can barely even see the animation.

CherishKuddleMonster

Quote from: Cl... on Mon 04/06/2018 23:38:18
To me it looks like she doesn't have a neck, that the face goes too far down.

Sidenote: You could make a gif with Licecap instead of a movie with whatever you used. Might put less of a strain on your system.

Thanks for suggestion I'm going to start over from scratch.

CherishKuddleMonster

Quote from: Stupot on Tue 05/06/2018 00:12:20
The lines are so thin I can barely even see the animation.

Sorry, next time I'll color it in before asking for opinions.

Click'd

Quote from: CherishKuddleMonster on Tue 05/06/2018 13:04:45
Sorry, next time I'll color it in before asking for opinions.

B/w is totally fine. I could see all of it.

ManicMatt

I struggled to make it out on my laptop, so Stupot wasn't the only one.

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