"Rafstroom" a demo dungeon by Lion

[LionOhDay]

Hello guys.

I found out about Adventure Game Studios around a month ago and got it in my head to make a game.
I've heard that any would be game maker should strive to create smaller games to learn the ropes and get better over time.
So I tried to do just that.
After working on it for around four weeks I'm finally happy enough with the demo to post it here.
While I don't think I'll keep working on this game as it is, I would like to come back to this game once I have some fully completed games under my belt and can do this story justice.

- Rafstroom -
The concept for this game is taken from a D&D adventure I ran with my players. You the player play one of those players, a Tiefling by the name of Ansem trying to find an ancient relic, the Book of Secrets. This relic is contained in a now abandoned temple to the Goddess of death, the Pale Lady.
As you explore the temple you will uncover it's secrets and meet several colorful characters.

http://www.mediafire.com/file/yxe0md7vai3mpu8/Rafstroom.zip/file

An example of one of the rooms in the game.

The achievement page. Viewable in game as well.

Thank you for your time. I look forward to your feedback.

[Laura Hunt]

Hi Lion, my advice would be to get a proofreader for starters:

its secrets
its game
its nest

Welcome to the forums 

[LionOhDay]

Well that's embarrassing.

Chalk that up as another lesson learned, spell check your stuff before posting it for the public to see.