Alright, I want you to listen, cause u can make an amazing game here, and this is important to me that you do that.
PROS:
1) You can make a dramedy out of this, it has sad vibes and it has funny vibes all over it
2) Portrait art is perfect! I like the various expressions, especially during the scene outside the bar
3) The music is fitting as well, and the whole case by case concept to progress the story is fantastic and should be kept
4) I really like the shots (camera angles) and the pace!!
CONS:
1) The font is not bad but not perfect either, u could find a better font imho
2) You need to spend the time to make everything like the portraits, you really do, it will make the game from a-okayish, to perfect. Given the humor and the storyline, I will gladly pay 4-8 bucks for this as it is, but I think it would really make the game shine if you spent the time to work on your characters and your backgrounds. That scene for example at the bar, works wonders, because it's all in that style. Even if the animation is clunky it's tons better than the rest of the game