Author Topic: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster  (Read 1300 times)

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Re: Maelstrom Obscura - Trailer Kickstarter
« Reply #20 on: 09 Oct 2019, 17:20 »
Getting ready for our Kickstarter Campaign.



Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #21 on: 10 Oct 2019, 06:17 »
When you have a chance, can you please upload a Linux version of your game?
Thanks

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Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #22 on: 10 Oct 2019, 14:57 »
Hi lanchong

we are in the middle of our campaign but rest assured we will upload Linux after..

Thank you

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Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #23 on: Yesterday at 10:35 »
This is our Kickstarter Pre-Project Page for Maelstrom Obscura, in production.

Frequently updated.

Please help us by visiting.

Thank you.

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/maelstromobscura/914119607?ref=74m7cj&token=20ecaac3

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Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #24 on: Yesterday at 12:37 »
Your Kickstarter is looking great.   :smiley:

But will the game be DRM-free or steam-only?  You need to add that information to your page. 

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Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #25 on: Yesterday at 16:58 »
Your Kickstarter is looking great.   :smiley:

But will the game be DRM-free or steam-only?  You need to add that information to your page. 

Yes it will be DRM-free... page now updated...


« Last Edit: Yesterday at 17:14 by Slasher »

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Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #26 on: Yesterday at 20:50 »
Great that the page is up!
A few remarks how it could be improved:
  • The video: You come across as likeable authentic. However, I have problems understanding you. I'm not a native speaker and I know that sometimes have problems understanding English speech, but I'm sure I'm not the only one in this situation. Please consider your audience and either have subtitles or make sure to record the video with better sound quality.
  • The pie chart is extremely low quality with lots of artefacts. Make sure to upload a file with better quality, now it looks kinda unprofessional.
  • Rewards: The order of items in 15 and 25 tier is mixed and I don't understand the difference between the two tiers (why would I pay 10 GBP for a text?)
  • 75GBP and onwards: Don't write that something will only apply for the first backers. Either make it for all of them or limit the amount of people who can back for this level.
  • Usually, the soundtrack would be included in a much lower tier. E.g. game is 15, game + soundtrack 25

Re: Maelstrom Obscura - The Legend of the Loch Ness Monster
« Reply #27 on: Yesterday at 23:58 »

  • The video: You come across as likeable authentic. However, I have problems understanding you. I'm not a native speaker and I know that sometimes have problems understanding English speech, but I'm sure I'm not the only one in this situation. Please consider your audience and either have subtitles or make sure to record the video with better sound quality.

I just want to echo this: as a Canadian, I usually understand most English dialects with no problem but was only able to understand about 2/3 of what was said.