Need some feedback on my Visual novels

Started by Furwerkstudio, Wed 15/01/2020 20:29:56

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Furwerkstudio

I just finished and published my third micro Visual Novel they are three separate games that are my experiments with Renpy to learn how the engine works. It is a kind of a reboot of my very NSFW webcomic characters Faustenstein, these are SFW mainly except My name is Ann as it has brief nudity and mentions causal sex but doesn't show anything.

I would like some feedback and ideas of what to do in future installments of this series.

Thank you in advance.

https://gamejolt.com/games/Theaccent/460314

My very first "game", more of a digital comic using text to speech, word balloons and not much else. It was just an off the cuff game about my two main characters, Pollyanna Faustenstein and Nakamura Rex, sitting on a couch and talking about accents.

https://gamejolt.com/games/theoffer/461448

The second game, this one was my first time experimenting with a menu.

The same two visit a tabletop game store, with Rex wanting to ask Faustenstein something while Faustenstein is wondering why does the Raccoon's tail acts like a third hand.

https://gamejolt.com/games/mynameisann/462845

The most recent game, with a few menus and different paths.

It is about the people Faustenstein encounters while at work, and a bit of her past.

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