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Yanek_Crispbread

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Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« on: 17 May 2020, 08:37 »
Hello all,

I am a first time developer (who carefully reads the tutorials and FAQs!) making a horror themed adventure (with Lovecraftian vibes) called Abscission.



The story centers around Will Stanhope, a detective in the fictional town of Ashfield in 1991. What begins as a seemingly routine (though savage) murder, begins to descend into a larger web of curious infections, body horror and tragedy. The player must progress through the story by talking to characters, combining clues, looking for evidence, solving puzzles, whilst fighting the effects of a dwindling sanity. August 2020 Update - A graphical and stylistic overhaul, along with an additional system of branching storylines and subplots has been added, which is influenced by Stanhope's actions and temperament. Characters will react differently to Stanhope depending on how he treats them.







Progress so far:

The story is 95% plotted (there is always room for improvement). I am also adding a lot of lore that can be found (such as old case files, news reports, etc) in order to enrich the world and increase immersion.
The story locations are around 50% completed.
I have added a journal system to keep track of story points, a map system for exploration (with locations opening up depending on player actions, connecting clues, etc), the ability to phone characters to build relationships and add to the story, and comic book style cutscenes.





I welcome all feedback as I want to make the best game I can, and it's the only way to improve. Thank you to the people who have commented, it's much appreciated :)

Thanks, Jake
« Last Edit: 16 Aug 2020, 12:43 by Yanek_Crispbread »
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Re: Abscission
« Reply #1 on: 17 May 2020, 16:42 »
Love the look of this, awesome to have another horror genre creator on board.
Best of luck with the development!

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Re: Abscission
« Reply #2 on: 17 May 2020, 18:01 »

Hi Yanek_Crispbread

Earlier on this afternoon I was raving about an up and coming game called
The Adventures of Black Hawk.

I now find myself going into raptures again over Abscission.

I will be looking forward to the release of another old school game

Who needs technical wizardry etc. when far more interesting and fulfilling
games, such as yours, can be produced.

Horror rules OK!  :grin:

Re: Abscission
« Reply #3 on: 27 May 2020, 15:20 »
This looks cool. So it is a horror detective game where you have to look for clues and solve a mystery?
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Re: Abscission
« Reply #4 on: 28 May 2020, 06:02 »
This is looking really, really nice!  I can't wait to play it!

Re: Abscission
« Reply #5 on: 28 May 2020, 10:56 »
Very good looking art!

Re: Abscission - updated May 2020
« Reply #6 on: 25 Jun 2020, 21:53 »
Looking good!!

Yanek_Crispbread

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Re: Abscission - updated August 2020
« Reply #7 on: 16 Aug 2020, 12:42 »
August 2020 update added.  :grin:
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Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #8 on: 16 Aug 2020, 14:07 »
The missing facial features make your detective character look like a slightly higher resolution version of Francis McQueen from The Darkside Detective. I guess you both tapped into that stereotypical getup.

Yanek_Crispbread

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Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #9 on: 16 Aug 2020, 14:44 »
I hadn't actually played Darkside Detective when I was designing Stanhope (though I have now). I'm a big fan of The Last Door and the ability of the games to convey horror through environment and atmosphere rather than the expressions of the characters, so that's what I'm hoping to get a smidge of in my game :)
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Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #10 on: 16 Aug 2020, 15:23 »
Actually the protagonist reminded me a lot more of Rainswept than Darkside Detective. But I really like the art style! The crayon-like aesthetic has a very strong German Expressionist vibe, especially in the last two screenshots (we do have a very similar figure in our game to the one hanging by those red threads, hahah). Really looking forward to seeing where this is going!

(And The Last Door is so good! Happy to meet another fan ;-D)
« Last Edit: 16 Aug 2020, 15:28 by Laura Hunt »

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Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #11 on: 16 Aug 2020, 16:32 »
Sure, I played both TLD games. And when I saw DD first it reminded me of them, too. But the combination of detective and missing face, in addition to DD being more recent, is why I made the mental connection.

Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #12 on: 16 Aug 2020, 19:46 »
Looking gorgeous. Love the character portraits!

Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #13 on: 16 Aug 2020, 23:01 »
I love your graphic style.

looks cool!  ;)

Re: Abscission - updated August 2020. +18 (Gore)
« Reply #14 on: 18 Aug 2020, 19:42 »
This looks really great, I love the concept and art style. Best of luck with development :)
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