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KyriakosCH

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What do you think of this sketch?
« on: 24 Mar 2021, 21:27 »


It is mostly a collage. The rest was done in 2d painting (gimp)

I call it "Don't Leave Me".
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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #1 on: 24 Mar 2021, 21:34 »
Without colors and at this resolution, it's hard to form an opinion.

Sarlacc pit in front of stairs?
 

KyriakosCH

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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #2 on: 24 Mar 2021, 21:36 »
Something similar... It only exists in this scale - because the monster was mostly collaged-in (although altered to a significant degree; the original looked more like an angry ant :) ).

It's supposed to be something which keeps you in the basement, because it can't be alone.
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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #3 on: 25 Mar 2021, 05:04 »
Creepiness factor doubled when I realised it had eyes.

KyriakosCH

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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #4 on: 25 Mar 2021, 12:56 »
Creepiness factor doubled when I realised it had eyes.

They are very small, probably it is almost blind :)
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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #5 on: 25 Mar 2021, 23:02 »
Some sort of centipede creature gaping at the onlooker?


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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #6 on: 25 Mar 2021, 23:23 »
Yes. It is blocking the ladder, so you can't leave the basement.
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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #7 on: 26 Mar 2021, 09:30 »
So why are we in the basement in the first place?

KyriakosCH

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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #8 on: 26 Mar 2021, 09:35 »
So why are we in the basement in the first place?

The price of curiosity  8-0
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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #9 on: 26 Mar 2021, 11:16 »
So why are we in the basement in the first place?

The price of curiosity  8-0

Så you (couriosity) killed the cat, went to the digital basement to bury it, and the way upstairs turned out to be bugged. 8-)

KyriakosCH

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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #10 on: 26 Mar 2021, 11:23 »
Sometimes you feel the need to retreat to your basement.
But you may never manage to return  (nod)
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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #11 on: 11 Apr 2021, 13:37 »
I like the feel of it as a memorable monster but the position directly in center frame feels a little deliberate and jump-scarish to me.

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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #12 on: 11 Apr 2021, 16:34 »
I like the feel of it as a memorable monster but the position directly in center frame feels a little deliberate and jump-scarish to me.
The scariest monsters to me, are always the ones you just barely notice at the side of the frame. Because it's like you're just noticing them from the corner of your eye.

KyriakosCH

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Re: What do you think of this sketch?
« Reply #13 on: 12 Apr 2021, 08:06 »
The whole point is that it doesn't want you to leave, so it had to be visible.
That said... it's not like this is some masterpiece or anything  :=
I may try more stuff in the future, I am not good at this as things stand.
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