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KyriakosCH

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Horror gives you wings
« on: 18 Oct 2021, 08:20 »


I should stop being lazy and finish this project.

Re: Horror gives you wings
« Reply #1 on: 19 Oct 2021, 13:45 »
Is this a play on Red Bull?

KyriakosCH

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Re: Horror gives you wings
« Reply #2 on: 19 Oct 2021, 13:55 »
Yes. Probably better to (try to) be funny when the gif is rather gruesome :o

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Re: Horror gives you wings
« Reply #3 on: 19 Oct 2021, 14:39 »
Are you seeking feedback, or just wanting to share something?
    I wasn't sure, since it doesn't seem like you were looking for critique, but since you posted here:
    • The angles are messed up: The wings are being seen straight on, but the person's body is looking to our left (and in fact, at that size, I initially thought his back was to us, and he had wings being sprouted out of his chest)
    • The wings seem a bit stiff (I'm assuming because the animation is simply the wings rotating, rather than actually folding)
    • I'm not getting particularly horrory vibes from it, in fact, it feels like an unexpected climatic situation as he swoops out from behind the hill to save the day

    I get the feeling you're going to tell me "Oh, it isn't complete yet". I look forward to seeing a completed piece for critique from you in the Critics Lounge one day :=.
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KyriakosCH

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Re: Horror gives you wings
« Reply #4 on: 19 Oct 2021, 14:46 »
(edit) Yeah, I thought of all that, and had tried some of it already (body placement). Let's see what happens in the end.
« Last Edit: 19 Oct 2021, 15:02 by KyriakosCH »