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Hey guys,

I've been tinkering around with creating a simple cartoon type background scene.  I'm just wondering what I can do to enhance it a little more?



I know its not the greatest, but it just something I did up to practice so any help, comments, etc would be appreciated

Awesome 3D rendering!  What did you use for the rendering?

Thanks InCreator & Matti

InCreator:

* Yeah the file cabinet seemed weird to me when I was drawing it (thus no further detail was done to it)...I'll go  rework it.

* I made the door a little bigger as well

* Agreed, the colors are horrible, and I don't intend to leave everything single-color, I just wanted to get some C&C before I went to crazy on color and detail.

Thanks again,
I will post and updated drawing for further C&C a little later one

Hi all,

This is my first attempt at creating any type of BG.  I was wondering if I could get some C & C on it.  Please note that I haven't even thought about the lighting aspect of it yet. Also something happened when I converted the drawing to JPG, so there are some funny lines going through the walls...please ignore.

Thanks

UPDATE:
So I made a better effort on the one point perspective.  There is a fair bit let do/modify, but I think its much better than my previous attempt. Please give some C & C.