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I definitly love your shading and the overall framing of the hallway thats friggan cool!

Best thing to try to find your work meaningful thats what I do to my work I try to tweek it until I feel its within me and feel like I achieved something and am happy with it. and dont let the other board  get you down they are extremely jelous ( so am I a bit but I hope to one day get on your level ) but I love the feel the art its really retro and gives a sense of some nostalgia.

I love the art the line work and the overall artistic feel  its great

friggan sweet

I wanna make a comment where maybe it would look would be the moutain and the house would be dark until the lightning strikes  have a longer lighting flash and it reveals a part of the house  then back to dark

your welcome and ill be animating my character soon I hope it goes as well as yours has

thanks for the heads up the pocket is a little off, sometimes you need freash  eyes on the project, and yes she is supposed to be short and 18, I did curvier her jawline a little more and added more details to her, ill be re-posting the image soon i just been procrastinating and working on her shoes

I say hes great I cant see any problems with him.  fromt he animations they look pretty good, great work

the last picture of one frame has the front totally blacked out when the lightning strikes, when the shadow is cast  think about what is proturding and not flat and then allocate what you feel should cast lighter shadows on.

your doing great , sorry I was just helpins

I made a indention on his feet and added a little curve shadowing to his belly with a soft light reflection   if you like the feet  you may wanna add a touch of shadowing behind his feet

that does look awesome. and nice character I would try to look at his shoulders and test a couple of different ideas, other than that pretty good stuff.

ack  making characters good luck buddy

i tried once it didnt look right to me, probbaly my skills at the time , maybe one day ill try again but yes keep up the art I wanna see more

Awesome work with the art I love it, I wish I could do pixel art

The height of the crotch isn't the same in front and backview. In the front it looks like jeans with a super low waistline while in the back it's just regular waistline.

I took a look at what your trying to tell me and I dont understand  the front and back images are mirrored with slight detailes fixed.

Loving the attention to detail on clothing and accessories but face is pretty unremarkable.
Is she supposed to be an adult?

Thanks about the details sadly im going to scale this character down immensely for my game so most of that detail will sadly be for not , and she is a HS teenager I might scullpt her cheek bones slightly more thinner. I will do some tests today and see how they come out .

thanks

There seem to be something with the porpotions, head/waist/leg that just seems a tad wrong, but may be just me.

Now I look at it her waist seems a bit off,and wow her leg ( im no good at drawing people hehehe ) her head I think  its ok her hair is supposed to be bushy. You should have seen her before  I fixed alot of her stuff.

It's worth exploring her lines a bit more. Just curious, do you intend classical or vector animation?

I wanna go with vector im not good at pixel and ill be doing some hand painting around her face, she supposed to portray a girl int he 80s  kinda a outsider.

Looks real nice! The only thing I was thinking about is the feet from the backside perspective. Looks like they could turn out to the sides a bit more, compared to the frontal perspective. Don't you think?

Yes I found that out this week as I was trying to figure out how to animate her, and realized  after my second drawing of her shoes that they are still at the wrong angle.


Thanks for the help, I appreciate it, ill try fixing those problems this weekend see if I can get there, im mostly trying to get some details on her shirt and pants done  then lastly its her hair and face.

Hello I thought I would just show off my character, she will be animated shortly after I finish shading her pants, shirt and make some  other things I was wondering if there any MAJOR problems with her if you think  so I can correct them before I get to animating?





Any constructive criticism does help, but honestly this is probably pretty good as it gets for my drawing skills 

You can set up and change how the GUIs look,any GUI thats in there you can change, the buttons the background the font you can also change and none of that you dont need scripting to do any of that. Is that what you mean ?

YAY, I gave AGS a clean install, went back to flash made a tiny background color without having no outline, just used BMP and then set to no transparency, thanks you guys for the help