Quote from: MashPotato on Thu 31/07/2008 01:36:14
Congratulations on the release of your demoThe game's got a unique look, and the "ping!" with the "Day 1" reminded me of The Shining, which is a good thing considering the game's premise
I assume this isn't the "official" demo, but just a preliminary one? If so, I realize this is probably still in the WIP stage, but I have some critique/suggestions if you don't mind:
1)make text skippable
2)some of the button hotspots seemed too small and I had to repeatedly click in order to get a response (eg. "New game"). I also had this problem with selecting inventory items
3)the dialogue font is rather hard to read on some backgrounds. This may be a personal preference thing, but I'm also not sold on using a font that is all-caps for a horror game. It seems a little too shout-y for an eerie atmosphere
4)I think it would be good to make the player turn to face whatever he's describing
5)it would be nice if commands could be interrupted (eg. while he's walking to interact with a hotspot, I can click somewhere else to cancel that)
6)when I pressed ESC, in addition to the options menu the quit message also popped up. Also, I could bring up the options menu on the opening screen
7)the mule deer slides during its animation
8)this is just my opinion, and perhaps it's not done yet, but for a commercial game I feel the game needs more animation (eg. log cutting (showing just the start before the fade), flag flapping)
9)the descriptions are rather bare-bones (once again, they may not be done yet)
10) I couldn't walk to the lake; I assume I wasn't supposed to be able to since it's a demo, but maybe disable that so people won't think it's a bug
I hope I haven't come across as too negativeThe premise sounds good, and it will be interesting to see how this develops. Good luck!
Thanks Mash for the effort of downloading and reviewing the demo (which is a WIP more than a demo).
EVERY single point you've put across had already crossed my mind and I intend to fix each and every one. Guaranteed, all of these will be implemented into the final product. As we've established, this 'demo' is really a WIP, released due to members asking me when a demo is going to be released, lol. Trust us, it'll be worth it when it's finished.
The 'pulsating lake'....yes, lol, this I'm totally aware of. Again, it will be fixed/tweaked.
Thankyou though Mash, I really appreciate the critisism

Quote from: abstauber on Thu 31/07/2008 08:44:15
Nice work!
The color are great and give the scenery a very gloomy atmosphere. Along with the music, I can imagine that this will get pretty thrilling.
But for pulsating lake... this looks a little strange. I think it would have been enough to move those ripples instead of letting the whole thing grow and shrink.
Thanks abstauber. Critisism taken on board! Thankyou!