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#81
Critics' Lounge / Re: Government Essay
Sun 09/04/2006 17:12:08
Quote from: Bartimaeus on Sun 09/04/2006 09:05:27
Aargh that is so annoying and so true. >:(

I know How you feel man.


UPDATED version in the first post. ^
#82
Critics' Lounge / Re: Government Essay
Sun 09/04/2006 05:01:29
I know what your saying again Dr. Scary. In my school career I have learned that instead of trying to express the truth its better to do what they tell you. I would really like to say what I think but thats not gunna get me into the class. Ã, :P


Fred: Thanks for the suggestions. I think I will add something about the voting and elections. Thanks again for the ideas! Ã, ;)


Snarky: All VERY good points. I may just remove the part about other countries rather than change most of the essay. Also good point about the 3/5 compromise. If someone is counted in the census they should have a say. Thank you for the gramatical suggestions as well. It's Midnight right now so I will work on this some more tomarrow.
#83
Critics' Lounge / Re: Government Essay
Sun 09/04/2006 04:14:33
I see what your saying Dr. Scary, this is suppose to be about the constitutional priciple so I dont want to go into overly detailed senarios about capitalism and etc. which isnt what it is suppose to be about.


Here is what it actually says on the application sheet.


"REQUIRED ESSAY: PICK ONE OF THESE CONSTITUTIONAL PRINCIPLES AND EXPLAIN WHY IT IS IMPORTANT TO ALL AMERICANS.


A)REPRESENTATIVE GOVERNMENT
B)IDIVIDUAL RIGHTS
C)CIVILIAN CONTROL OF THE MILITARY"

Thanks for the ideas, I will try to fix it up to say more about the rights of the people, and what happens when ther IS an representative government. I will give at least one example.
#84
If they ask you to stop just change them to unlicenced.
#85
the ® means registered trademark i believe. Or does it have to do with being kosher? or is that a P in a circle?
#86
Quote from: Raggit on Sat 08/04/2006 16:24:23
Those are just liberal lies from Godless "scientists!!!!" Ã, 

liberal lies

If the liberals are lying so much, then what the conservatives doing?
#87
Critics' Lounge / Government Essay
Sun 09/04/2006 03:32:36
I am writing this essay about "The improtance of Representative Government to All Americans". It is for my Advanced Placement Goverment class application. I really need the college credits from this class so if you could harshly critiqe this I would greatly appreciate it.


http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/GovernmentAPP.doc


UPDATED: http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/GovernmentAPP2.doc
#88
Oops. I'm retarded.
#89
I really though that the Calvin and Hobbs one was not funny in the least  ???
#90
Voh, you didnt leave a end date and its past march so I think we should wrap this up as a three way competition.
#91
I think its marginally comical. I instantly recoungnised both characters. It wasnt enough for a laugh but It made sense and I guess the message is that Jimminy Cricket wont grant Hitlers wish for the "Final Solution".
#92
Is there even a point in telling you how to improve if you arn't even going to do anything but more things around and post the SAME things? But for the hell of it- All the hair looks like its plastered up. It needs to hang flatter. I will be very dissapointed (more than I am now) if you dont crop the images next time.
#93
If everything is 100% besides voices why dont you release the non-talkie version now. Because I seriously can't wait to see the fruits of your work. NO SARCASM THERE^.
#94
Thats pretty awesome. I guess the reason I didnt use it was because I didnt know what it was.  ;)
#95
I really don't know what you're talking about.
#96
Not to put you down or anything, but why do you save your images with such a large background? Crop it. If all else fails select your character and cut. Create a new image and paste. Tada.
#97
I'm glad that you finally discovered photobucket. Nice work. Here is about 1/2 second of work in paint to crop your image. (the pink background makes this features easier to see.) Have fun.



#99
You go to the uploading website, then it gives you a link and you paste it into your post.
#100
Quote from: MashPotato on Mon 03/04/2006 01:41:05If I didn't know who Hitler was already, going only by the visuals of this poster I would think he's some sort of hero  :-\
I guess it doesnt really matter because most everyone knows who Hitler was.
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