See RedPhoenix, I told you they could help you better than me! 
LimpingFish did a tremendous job there, he caught the essence of your words and somehow organized it, still maintaining your poetry.
I find the English language to be much richer than I thought it would be when I first started to learn it at school.
It looks simple and basic compared to a Latin based language but it is just the surface of it.
So, don't be disappointed and keep doing your songs!

LimpingFish did a tremendous job there, he caught the essence of your words and somehow organized it, still maintaining your poetry.
I find the English language to be much richer than I thought it would be when I first started to learn it at school.
It looks simple and basic compared to a Latin based language but it is just the surface of it.
So, don't be disappointed and keep doing your songs!
