looking a lot better now.
I suppose you read up on lights and shadows some more. I mean, your lightsource is on the left side (it seems), why arethere these straight line shadows on the building on the left and not on the right. where do the shadows come from.l The shadows on the trees seem okay, but the trees themseves have shadows, the left tree a more diffure one than the tree on the right, but judging from the shadow of the middle rail the shadow of the right tree is just wrong.
what is in the background of the building? What is the overall light condition? Is it noght? Then everything is too bright, and you'd need more lightsources. Is the building inside some bigger scifi complex, so no daylight in here? Same, too bright overall or too few lightsources shown...
I suppose you read up on lights and shadows some more. I mean, your lightsource is on the left side (it seems), why arethere these straight line shadows on the building on the left and not on the right. where do the shadows come from.l The shadows on the trees seem okay, but the trees themseves have shadows, the left tree a more diffure one than the tree on the right, but judging from the shadow of the middle rail the shadow of the right tree is just wrong.
what is in the background of the building? What is the overall light condition? Is it noght? Then everything is too bright, and you'd need more lightsources. Is the building inside some bigger scifi complex, so no daylight in here? Same, too bright overall or too few lightsources shown...