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Its good now! You should just add some depth to the farmhouse roof. What do you need a hand with?

Looks alot better now. Only thing you have to fix is the farmhouse roofs as they are still out of perspective But again, it looks very good!

Well... It looks kinda good, but now it looks like the cliff edge is just a big gravel road or something. And the farmhouses look a bit wierd. If you could try to give the cliff edge a bit more depth and give the houses a bit more right perspective. But other than that it looks good.
Vict0r

I dont know what a "cul-de-sac" is but i dont like the idea of either a village since, correct me if im wrong, there arent usually villages in the outskirts of a city, or cows grazing(i dont really see why there should be cows there.  no cows outside my town:P). But just try out stuff and see what turns out the best taffy!

It looks good! I think that if you made a grass plain or something in the white area, and maybe a couple of houses (not skyscraperthingys but houses). Looking forward to the finished product

First of all i'd like to say its a great drawing! There are two things bothering me tough. On the front view it looks like she havent got breasts but badly drawn pockets where they should be. Second i think you should make her neck way shorter. If you look closer you see that it should be only half of what it is now.
But other than that its a good drawing!


Breasts


Neck

Thanks a lot!
Right now i have only the discription of the main character. He is supposed to be an automechanic about 25 years old. Since he is an automechanic he could have some oil-stained clothes or something. Dont have any more discriptions right now so just knock yourself out really

Thanks alot in advance!

That does look a lot better I like the shadow effect but the shadow by the red toolbox thingy should be going towards us instead of away from the box since the light are coming from the ceiling and not the left wall.
The outskirts pic looks good! Looking forward seeing it finished
Zor: The thing you called shelf is probably a (dont know the word in english) thing to pin notes and stuff on.

Hmm... Could you try to add some shadowy effect, for example under the desk, the red "toolbox" thingy and the shelf. And maybe try to make the city outside the windows a bit darker. But other than that i looks good

Looking forward to seeing the outskirts pics
(no crappy sprites from me today either)

Since i now have no character designer at all im more than happy to recieve some help (no mather how unreliable it is) I dont really know what chutulluh is so i dont know what to say but i dont have any real hurry so you can take your time:P
(p.s. i only need character sprites)
Thanks

Thats really nice! But i cant seem to open the second sprite you are showing But the sprites are in fact really really great! (you wouldn't be interested in making character sprites for my game? check the "The Dread of the Dead" thread )

Taffy: It looks good but i think there should be a bit less dirt on the sides of the "alley". Tomorrow i can send you some ideas for the first rooms of the game

And again, I NEED CHARACTER ARTISTS

sorry for spamming everyone

First of all i have to clear up in something The thing about the batmobile-ish car was only a small part when i tried to make the game alone so forget about that. Second of all i still really need a character artist! (ain't gonna be no game without characters) So if there are anyone interested please tell me
Oswalled: I have taken your advice and dropped the "find the source and stop the whole thing" This would not only make the game more (as you say) clichè but also remove the posibillity of a follow-up. And you said something about wanting to help(at least thats how i interpreted it) so please let me know if you have anything to contribute with!
Taffy: The background may be useful so just keep it.
Everyone else: Im actually using a nice thing called The Zombie Survival Guide( http://www.randomhouse.com/crown/zombiesurvivalguide/ ) to make my game as realistic (if there are anything as a realistic zombie game) as possible

I could definetly use your help! The thought that he could be a car mechanic or something sounds good, but didnt really get the part about the soliders and stuff Seen as im now at an internet kafè in italiy( ) its pretty hard to send you anything really, but i m prolly back in norway in about two weeks or so, so im gonna send my all too crappy prototypes when i can.  if you know of anyone who can make the characters please tell me.

Thanks for the enthusiasm! And if taffytom really wants to make some/all of the sprites this game may turn out somewhat good I'm not even half finished with the story so if any of you have any ideas it would be nice 
Thanks again

Thank you for the reply folks. First of all i'm gonna start talking full and second of all im gonna try to answer some of the stuff you said. This is not going to be a shoot-em-up game. It's made completely in ags and may actually not have any visual zombie smashing at all.(please straighten my typos. im norwegian) It may be we wont see any zombies at all in this game, but that they are only a part of the story. And what is this clichè talk about? Please tell me what adventure games that has a zombie story and i'll make my game as different as possible

Hello everybody. Im starting a new game here i'm kinda wanting some opinions about the game story, so i thought this was the right place to post this. (And btw i really need artists for the game! Not much experience needed.)

THE STORY:
Our hero has just managed to get away from a bunch of bloodthirsty zombies by getting into an abandoned house in the middle of nowhere. Our hero (Named Jack btw) manages to get down a hatch in the floor in this building and by using an all-armored bat mobile-ish car getting as far as possible from the zombies as possible he starts his quest trying to find the source of the horrible plague that has ruined almost all of mankind and trying to find something to stop the zombies.

Plz say your opinion about the story
(sry if this is the wrong place to post it but this seems like the best place to post )

Hello everybody. Im starting a new game here i'm kinda wanting some opinions about the game story, so i thought this was the right place to post this. (And btw i really need artists for the game! Not much experience needed.)

THE STORY:
Our hero has just managed to get away from a bunch of bloodthirsty zombies by getting into an abandoned house in the middle of nowhere. Our hero (Named Jack btw) manages to get down a hatch in the floor in this building and by using an all-armored bat mobile-ish car getting as far as possible from the zombies as possible he starts his quest trying to find the source of the horrible plague that has ruined almost all of mankind and trying to find something to stop the zombies.

Plz say your opinion about the story-