Damn It!!!

ALPHATT · Mon 21/05/2007 18:19:59

FireStorm Entertainment
PRESENTS

Story:
You play as a loser "policeman" who has the lowest ranking in the PD.
But one day he finds himself in a big case.... and at the and he can become
a NORMAL POLICE OFFICER!!!!!!

Screenies:

NOTE:This screenies are under inprovement i will update when I finish them.

Features:
-Good humor delaling with policemen
-Multiplie endings
-Aquire points by using the term: "Damn it"
-Collect special suprises at the ending.

Graphics:20%
Story:50%
Animations:0%
Scripting:10%
Music:20%

Thats for now. What do you think.

UPDATE: Well i've decieded not to do big inproovements put I replaced the lame graffiti with a normal one.

Darth Mandarb · Mon 21/05/2007 18:39:05

If these screens aren't the final versions (and you have none that are) you should have waited to post this. I'm not going to lock it as it does technically follow the rules ... but if you aren't far enough to have two completed/finalized backgrounds you should have waited longer to post.

Anyway ...

You might want to read/research a bit about Police Departments and the ranking structure(s). Saying "lowest rank possible" and "normal police officer" sounds silly. Something like "You start of as a rookie cadet" and you quest to become an official "Officer of the Law" or something like that!

Good luck w/ the game.

ALPHATT · Mon 21/05/2007 19:33:42

Yeah your right but our hero is not a rookie cadet but very unrespected policeman
Everybody hates him and he gets lower payment then anyone. What is bathing the law scince hes a policman as well,but noone cares about a loser.
Oh and sorry for posting with graphics what I'm improoving but I wanted to show
people that apart from the fact that I'm 13 (14 on summer) Im making my game not
just chit chating on the forums.

m0ds · Mon 21/05/2007 23:42:13

Coming along nicely! Better gfx than I could do at 13

Still, good luck!

Crit - is that grafiti so necessary?!

Steel Drummer · Tue 22/05/2007 01:32:36

The GFX are okay, but it looks like you spent more time on the title than the backgrounds.

ALPHATT · Tue 22/05/2007 18:08:53

The title was 30 seconds i used South Park fonts.

Jon · Tue 22/05/2007 20:16:55

Quote from: Wtcq on Mon 21/05/2007 18:19:59-Aquire points by using the term: "Damn it"

I honestly cannot wait for this game!

ALPHATT · Wed 23/05/2007 06:28:25

Quote from: Jon on Tue 22/05/2007 20:16:55
Quote from: Wtcq on Mon 21/05/2007 18:19:59-Aquire points by using the term: "Damn it"
I honestly cannot wait for this game!

Hey man youll see it'll be goood coz:
1.You cant say Damn it anytime you haev to get into a sitation where our hero says
Damn it e.g.:You see that you gun is changed into water gun then you say: "Dammit
who the hell did this" and you get a point and there will be another way to say "Damn it"
but its a secret.

Dr Fred Rubacant Edison · Wed 19/09/2007 05:42:45

Cool

I should draw Backgrounds like that for my Maniac Mansion Fan game. My BackGrounds are no good

Gilbert · Wed 19/09/2007 06:07:59

What's the point of digging up a thread nearly four months old?

I'll suggest you calm down a bit and stop posting randomly in different places until you have well thought out something valuable to say, just my advice.

Darth Mandarb · Wed 19/09/2007 13:04:13

Rubacant - take a breath, calm yourself, and read the forum rules (in all threads). And do NOT dig up old threads in here... ever.

Locked for now.

Wtcq - if/when you're ready with an update PM me (include the link to this thread) and I will unlock it.

Damn It!!!

m0ds