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Title: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Rui Winneth
Post by: Shinan on Mon 12/09/2005 19:08:14
Ze Rules:
- Participants will write a story not limited by length unless specified by the month's rules;
- It's impossible for a judge to be impartial in this kind of competition where, for instance, great writing can save a meager plot. So the voting will be public, and go on for at least a week after the deadline, when the winner will be announced.
- The deadline itself is, as said before, monthly, but as usual some slack is given. Don't abuse it, though. Five days after the "oficcial" deadline no further entries are allowed and voting begins, but this tolerance is not mandatory, rather left to the thread-starter's description.
- The competition should last a month. Therefore, this particular one will run until the 13th of October.
- The actual posts must NOT contain the story, but a link to it. The story MUST be hosted somewhere, even if temporarily.
  - The object of this is to write a story. It can be a short story with 10 lines, it can be a whooper with 20 pages. It can have no characters, or a myriad of them. It can be in first person, or third; present or past of future tense. Your ONLY limitations are the ones the rules state, if any.
- The winner provides the theme and rules for the next comp.

And the theme for this month:

ZOMBIES

the story should feature, in some way (the more obscure the better I suppose, but fairly stereotypical zombie stories work too) zombies. Zombies can be anything from Office Slaves/Factory Workers who do the same monotonous task day out day in to the hordes of undead Necromancers in fantasy worlds tend to summon.

Ideas can include a man who is about to become a zombie after being bitten, or even a story from the zombie's point of view. Other ideas can be how zombies affect daily life (for inspiration see the scenes in Land of the Dead before the action really begins), with the zombies just serving as a backdrop. Or just have some explorer meet Voodoo people (is that South America?) and have a zombie servant in the background.


And yeah I'm a sucker for zombies so I may very well enter myself.
May the shouting of BRAAAAINS commence! ;D
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Tuomas on Mon 12/09/2005 19:40:14
I'm in... just to say I'm in, so I'm in nevertheless.

In the game I mean... whatever, I'm in...(the game)
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Haddas on Mon 12/09/2005 20:58:50
Well here's my contribution to this genre I like to call gorefest. Except mine's not that gory at all.

http://www.tdrdesign.net/uploads/theundead.rtf
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Rui 'Trovatore' Pires on Mon 12/09/2005 21:40:13
I'll enter, sure enough, but I'd just like to point out that MicroTech is down.

EDIT - Here it is. God, I'm going to hell for this one...

Mass (http://www.lumpcity.co.uk/~skimbleshanks/SeptOct%20Comp.txt)
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: TheYak on Fri 23/09/2005 11:57:22
It's been too long since I've done any creative writing.  Note to self: Always remember to actually plan your story, then your plot might actually have cohesion. 

Anyway. . . linkage (http://www.geocities.com/mikerrh/zomb.rtf)
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: esper on Fri 30/09/2005 10:24:58
I've never tried the story competition, so I'll give it a go. Does this story count, since I wrote it to go with the ESPER game? I didn't write it just for this competition...

Well, regardless, here it is. I hope you enjoy it, even if it doesn't count...

http://www.storywrite.com/Story/1540788
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Vince Twelve on Thu 06/10/2005 08:22:01
I've got something worked up for this contest, but I wanted to quickly ask: Are we allowed to post these on the CL to help polish them up before entering, or should I do that after the contest?

EDIT 36 HOURS LATER: Silence is consent!
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Shinan on Sat 08/10/2005 07:58:26
My gut reaction was that you shouldn't, but then I thought why not? Some post stories they've written long before the competition and I suppose that one really should try to do the story as polished as possible. It may feel a bit weird that the feedback is in the same forum as the competition but... well...

Silence is consent :)


Hmm, I have a few days left and I haven't started writing yet. I have to come up with something...
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Vince Twelve on Wed 12/10/2005 03:54:08
Alright.  It's miles long and I haven't really the time to polish it up any more.  So here it be:

"A Long Procession is Brought to an End When a Black Silhouette Appears on the Horizon"

.doc format (http://www.thexiis.com/media/ALongProcession.doc)
.txt format (http://www.thexiis.com/media/ALongProcession.txt)
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Shinan on Thu 13/10/2005 18:33:55
I suppose this be the deadline day. Unfortunately I just haven't had the inspiration the last few days to conjure something up. I have two beginnings I did at the beginning but I can't really continue them right now. However if someone else has a story they like to submit they still have some time.

Otherwise I suppose we'll start voting eh?
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition 13th September - 13th October
Post by: Vince Twelve on Fri 14/10/2005 13:28:14
I vote Rui.  If he's going to hell, he might as well win this competion first.  And it's an interesting and unique story.
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Voting Beginneth
Post by: TheYak on Sat 15/10/2005 09:19:26
I've gotta second that.  I liked the unconventional style of it, and seemed the least cliché.  Would've been nice to have some <CR>s though.  Even if he's going to hell, Rui rules.
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Voting Beginneth
Post by: esper on Sat 15/10/2005 09:23:26
I liked Yak's, but why does no one use wordwrap? or is it just the way my computer is handling it?
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Voting Beginneth
Post by: TheYak on Sat 15/10/2005 11:09:44
People see it as auto word-wrapping on theirs but since they don't have carriage returns or more formatted documents (like RTF or DOC) non word-wrap capable viewers (like Netscape Browser for me) make it a PITA to read.   Mine reads okay in Word or Wordpad (Edit: should say, word-wraps as it doesn't read well no matter the viewing program).
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Voting Beginneth
Post by: Andail on Tue 18/10/2005 13:57:17
Could you try to wrap this up? It's getting a bit over due
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Voting Beginneth
Post by: Shinan on Wed 19/10/2005 09:12:46
Okay. I also like Rui's very much. The others were also good but Rui's had that strangeness about it. I suppose that's three votes for Rui so Rui's the winner!

Congratulations your time to conjure up a theme for the next competition.



(Btw for November there's http://www.nanowrimo.org for anyone who likes to write plenty 8^)
Title: Re: Monthly Story Competition - 13th October - Rui Winneth
Post by: Rui 'Trovatore' Pires on Wed 19/10/2005 10:34:02
"That strangeness"? Heh. Thanks muchly.

Right-o, I'm putting up a new comp soon enough!