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Title: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Mon 31/03/2008 20:31:40
Welcome, ladies and gentlemen, it is time to kick off this activity.
TEH RULES! READ CAREFULLY!!
The general idea is that you will receive a document attached to an email in your inbox, which you will add an amount of text to, and then send to another writer. By participating here, you are obliged to read through the story in its entirety, and make sure you understand it as well as possible, before you add your passage. If you don't have the time or motivation to read through the story that you receive, don't add to it, just pass it along.

How do we do it?P
This time, we write 300 words each. For the sake of coherence and quality, please try your best to make the passage you contribute with fit in the already existing story, and avoid clashing too strikingly with its genre and tone of voice. Remember tense and person and try not to confuse the future readers.

This time, the story will branch in a certain pattern that is laid out below.

                                                       Vince_Twelve
                                                        rock_chick
                                           /                                       
                            Babar                                                  Jack Sheehan
                           Stupot                                                   Tuomas
                     brokenbutterfly                                           Antonio
                          auriond                                                   enveloop
                 /                                                               /                     
[Cameron]                   LGM                                   Eggie                 Pixelperfect
FSi                                voh                                   Jon                     Akatosh
Candall                       Afflict                                 Emerald                Venus
TheJBurger                 twin-moon                      lo_res_man             Jelfish
                                  Andail

You need to consult the signing up-thread (http://www.adventuregamestudio.co.uk/yabb/index.php?topic=34023.0) to find the cunningly disguised email addresses.

Huh?
Ok, to clarify: Vince_Twelve gets the honour to write the opening passage. After him, Rock-Chick takes over before the story divides into two paths. This means she must send the document to both Babar and Jack Sheehan.
Two teams take over the story, add their words and send it along to the four final teams.
TheJburger, Yours truly, Lo-res-man and Jelfish each makes sure they finish their versions, so we get four complete stories. Of course, each story will only be 3000 words, and less than half of every story will be unique reading.

Time frame
Use this thread (yes it will be cluttered beyond comprehension) to confirm that you've received the document. You must receive and send the story within 48 hours, or the person before you will re-send it to the writer after you in line. This means you have two days to add your passage.
The four stories don't need to be published simultaneously; whenever one path is completed, it will be published here.

Reminders
Keep in mind where you're positioned, and adjust your text to fit that position. If you're in the beginning, don't kill off important characters or try to conclude the story. If you're towards the end, don't introduce too many new characters or concepts.

What do we write about?
Here's the funny part. The genre of this edition's story shall be:

                                              A CONTEMPORARY URBAN SATIRE

Have fun!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Mon 31/03/2008 22:35:52
Quote from: from lo_res_man(I just hope for the love of Christopher Robin I am not the last)
Guess Christopher Robin doesn't like us both.

Andail, did I tell you I hate writing endings?  >:(

Quote from: Andail on Mon 31/03/2008 20:31:40
Here's the funny part. The genre of this edition's story shall be:

                                              A CONTEMPORARY URBAN SATIRE

Somehow I assumed it would be a detective story again. Silly me.

Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Mon 31/03/2008 23:22:01
Sounds fantastic lads, I'm really glad I get to start one of the branches, it'll be interesting to note where the differences (and similarities I guess) are between my and Babar's take on things.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Mon 31/03/2008 23:29:23
Here we go then...
Good luck everyone.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Tue 01/04/2008 00:43:35
Contemporary urban... oh dear...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Tue 01/04/2008 01:10:48
Contemporary?

Urban?

Satire?

:o

This is gonna be interesting!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Tue 01/04/2008 03:58:20
Ok, first update!  I've written and am waiting for Rock_chick to PM me her email address which she didn't want to share in the thread.  I'm not really sure how to start a contemporary urban satire, but I've given it my best shot.

The good news is, it isn't horribly inconsistent yet!

The bad news is, this is just the beginning...  :-*

Edit:  Nevermind, Rock_chick got back to me and apparently she lost interest.  I've sent it on to Babar and Jack Shehan.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: rock_chick on Tue 01/04/2008 08:59:03
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Tue 01/04/2008 03:58:20
Ok, first update!  I've written and am waiting for Rock_chick to PM me her email address which she didn't want to share in the thread.  I'm not really sure how to start a contemporary urban satire, but I've given it my best shot.

The good news is, it isn't horribly inconsistent yet!

The bad news is, this is just the beginning...  :-*
Just to let you guys know I am going through some stuff at the moment and signed up a week or so ago and just found out I was involved in this officially. So I'm letting you all know I am no longer interested, sorry to let you all down.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Babar on Tue 01/04/2008 09:36:51
Received now. Am going through it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Tue 01/04/2008 11:20:58
Quote from: Babar on Tue 01/04/2008 09:36:51
Received now. Am going through it.
I'm looking forward to it, Babs.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Tue 01/04/2008 16:57:24
Quote from: auriond on Tue 01/04/2008 01:10:48
Contemporary?

Urban?

Satire?

:o

This is gonna be interesting!

I agree. Different styles is bad enough... now we gotta deal with the different sense of humour, and the inevitable toilet jokes (there's always one person who loves toilet jokes...)

Pessimistically yours,
Emerald :P
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: lo_res_man on Wed 02/04/2008 00:15:22
*sigh* and I again, am at the bottom of the list. Well, at least the list is shorter this time. Oh well. . . ::)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Wed 02/04/2008 02:20:43
Quote from: Emerald on Tue 01/04/2008 16:57:24
(there's always one person who loves toilet jokes...)

Uh-oh, shouldn't have said that, now everybody's going to try and be "that guy" :P
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Babar on Wed 02/04/2008 08:31:32
Done, and sent off to Stupot. 24 hours was a little short, though. I liked the 48 hour limit.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Wed 02/04/2008 08:37:38
I generally agree.  I like to sleep on something before showing it to the world.  Also, technically, I guess I'm supposed to skip Sheehan and send it on to Tuomas now that it's been 24 hours, but I think I'll give him a little extra time, since we've already lost one writer.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Wed 02/04/2008 09:32:41
Fair enough, let's officially increase it to 48 hours. We're not really in a rush anyway.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Wed 02/04/2008 11:48:19
Feck, it got caught in my spam filter. Give me a day or so and I'll have it for you. Sorry for the delay lads.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: PixelPerfect on Wed 02/04/2008 13:15:52
Maybe it would be good to write here (like in the last comp) when you have sent the e-mail forward. That way the next one knows to look for it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Wed 02/04/2008 13:55:20
Also, I added myself after Twinmoon, as she explicitly wrote she didn't want the ending part. I promise I will do my best to give it a nice ending.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Wed 02/04/2008 18:41:35
I've sent it to Tuomas, It looks fine so far I think, I tried a little religious humour, so get ready to groan.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Wed 02/04/2008 19:26:32
Thanks Jack, I've received it, done my share and sent it onwards to Antonio. Branch B here is looking rather nice at the moment :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Thu 03/04/2008 01:55:57
So how's Branch A going? Status update anyone... Stupot?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Thu 03/04/2008 02:00:07
I've done my bit and sent it to BrokenButterfly.
If I found out one thing it is that I cannot write Contemporary Urban Satires, but I think I succeeded in making it fairly humourous, if maybe a little OTT. I hope it works, though.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Thu 03/04/2008 02:18:09
Logging in just to tell you I've received it. :)

auriond, expect an email from me in 24 hours, less if I'm inspired, or more if I'm not. Since the deadline has been extended maybe I'll take advantage of it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Thu 03/04/2008 03:29:24
Alrighty - no hurry as I'm also having a busy spell right now. Thank goodness for the 48 hours :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Venus on Thu 03/04/2008 14:41:22
Just to let you guys know, I'll be on an unforseen business trip up to and including April 9. I'm still planning to add my part to the story though. So if the story gets to me way before the 9th, please give me a couple of extra hours to add my bit on the 10th.

Thanks
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Thu 03/04/2008 19:13:23
I've finished my part, and have sent it on to auriond. Saying it here, and also PMed her about checking her mail in case it goes into the junk folder  :)

I'm a bit over 300 words, I hope it's ok. I realize how 300 words is really not a lot, and once you start it's hard to stop  ;D
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Thu 03/04/2008 23:28:43
Quote from: brokenbutterfly on Thu 03/04/2008 19:13:23
I'm a bit over 300 words, I hope it's ok.
My part was a tad under 300, so consider it level. :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Fri 04/04/2008 03:28:16
And done! Sent it on to Cameron and LGM. I exceeded my 300 words by a bit as well... golly, it's sure hard to stop once you're on a roll!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: [Cameron] on Fri 04/04/2008 07:00:45
Here we go, I sent it on to FSi. This story is magnificent so far, I love it :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Fri 04/04/2008 17:10:39
Has Antonio sent it off yet? Our side appears to be stalling.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Antonio on Fri 04/04/2008 19:47:56
I'll be done with it tonight everyone, will send it on ASAP...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Antonio on Sat 05/04/2008 08:58:30
I've sent it on to enveloop, it's looking good... :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Sat 05/04/2008 15:02:08
LGM, get yer arse in gear!! :P
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Sat 05/04/2008 15:34:33
Enveloop hasn't been active since 25 march. I fear we may have to skip him.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Sat 05/04/2008 16:27:11
And that'd only be the second from branch B then altogether :D well, I guess we'll be a bit shorter then...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Sat 05/04/2008 17:22:46
Quote from: Tuomas on Sat 05/04/2008 16:27:11
And that'd only be the second from branch B then altogether :D well, I guess we'll be a bit shorter then...

Who was the first one?  ??? rock_chick was in the branch before it divided so she won't make make Branch B shorter per se  :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Sat 05/04/2008 17:56:26
Shorter than the original plan I mean
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: LGM on Sat 05/04/2008 18:37:36
Sorry, guys. been a crazy weekend. I actually wrote my addition yesterday, but got pulled from the computer before i could send it off. So now I'm trying to recreate it here. Please be patient, I'm working on it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: LGM on Sun 06/04/2008 20:55:37
I sent off the story to Voh yesterday, dunno where it is today.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Sun 06/04/2008 21:19:45
Should you skip enveloop yet?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Antonio on Sun 06/04/2008 21:40:59
Is this the general consensus?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: PixelPerfect on Sun 06/04/2008 22:04:43
If he has been last active 25th of march then what are the odds he'll show up in the next 10 hours? I'd say skip him.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Antonio on Sun 06/04/2008 22:14:32
Eager, PP?  ;)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: PixelPerfect on Sun 06/04/2008 22:18:29
You got me! Guilty as charged.  ;) :D

EDIT: I got the text from Antonio just now and I'm starting to work on it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Mon 07/04/2008 04:09:29
Alright, I *did* get it. Stupid spamfilter hid it from me >_<

Right, gonna read it through now, will post an update soon.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: PixelPerfect on Mon 07/04/2008 08:40:23
Okay... I've done my part and send it to Akatosh.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Mon 07/04/2008 16:28:33
Ooh I'm excited, it's getting near the end of this tier.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Mon 07/04/2008 16:40:38
Haven't had time yet and have to work in a bit. I'll work on it when I get back from work and post the send-on here :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Akatosh on Mon 07/04/2008 16:56:16
Quote from: PixelPerfect on Mon 07/04/2008 08:40:23
Okay... I've done my part and send it to Akatosh.

Received. Might take some time until I can pass it, though... sorry.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Mon 07/04/2008 18:07:13
So Eggie is working on it now? I assume it was sent to him at the same time as Pixie, which means it's been 15 hours.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Evil on Mon 07/04/2008 18:32:22
Let's not be time nazi's. People have lives.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Mon 07/04/2008 19:33:29
Quote from: Evil on Mon 07/04/2008 18:32:22
Let's not be time nazi's. People have lives.

Time Nazis? Sounds like a good idea for a game.

Just Vince XII I also like to sleep on it for a day. I'm glad Andail changed the time limit to 48 hours.
And we all want a good story, right? So take your time.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Mon 07/04/2008 20:10:47
TimeNazis II: Schpiers Space-Time Continuum Conundrum.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: LGM on Mon 07/04/2008 22:39:32
haha, I realized I was signed in as Evil when I typed that. My bad, nobody tell him. SHH!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Mon 07/04/2008 23:10:15
So you can sign in as Evil? Interesting.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Tue 08/04/2008 01:30:55
I don't want to be a time nazi, either, but what's up with FSi?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: LGM on Tue 08/04/2008 05:54:59
Well, I was using his laptop, Andail.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Tue 08/04/2008 16:12:11
Didn't mean to be anal. Just doing the math... for fun...

Quote from: [Cameron] on Fri 04/04/2008 07:00:45
Here we go, I sent it on to FSi. This story is magnificent so far, I love it :)

That would be 4 days 9 hours (105 hours) and 12 minutes. Not sure how many seconds...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: [Cameron] on Tue 08/04/2008 17:04:11
Well, I'm now skipping FSi, and sending it on to Candall.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Candall on Tue 08/04/2008 19:35:14
Alright, I got it!  I'll read it through a few times and then see what I can hammer out.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Wed 09/04/2008 02:00:14
Alright, sent it on to Afflict.

I think it's about the time to start working on an ending and tying up some loose strings ;)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Candall on Wed 09/04/2008 17:13:25
And I have sent our branch to TheJBurger.

Edit:  Due to the fact that I'm an idiot, I managed to mistype TheJBurger's email address.  I'm now confident that my years of practice at emailing won't fail me again.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Wed 09/04/2008 17:30:02
Quote from: PixelPerfect on Sun 06/04/2008 22:18:29
EDIT: I got the text from Antonio just now and I'm starting to work on it.

If Eggie got it at the same time, then that's 62 hours 27 minutes and counting... (going off the 'last edited' time-stamp)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Wed 09/04/2008 17:35:40
I think Jelfish will have to be skipped aswell. He hasn't signed in since march 21st.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Wed 09/04/2008 17:42:26
Damn, how many people is that?


Update:

                                                       Vince_Twelve
                                                        rock_chick
                                           /                                       \
                            Babar                                                  Jack Sheehan
                           Stupot                                                   Tuomas
                     brokenbutterfly                                           Antonio
                          auriond                                                   enveloop
                 /                      \                                             /                      \
[Cameron]                   LGM                                   Eggie                 Pixelperfect
FSi                                voh                                   Jon                     Akatosh
Candall                       Afflict                                 Emerald                Venus
TheJBurger                 twin-moon                      lo_res_man             Jelfish
                                  Andail
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Wed 09/04/2008 17:54:08
All this makes me very disappointed. People should not promise to do things they can't bother with.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TheJBurger on Wed 09/04/2008 18:59:57
Okay, I got it.
I just read through it once, but I feel I may need a bit of time to finish this up.
Don't expect something soon.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Wed 09/04/2008 20:42:40
Our side seems to have stalled completely. I think Akatosh has it but I may be wrong.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Wed 09/04/2008 20:56:23
Quote from: Akatosh on Mon 07/04/2008 16:56:16
Received. Might take some time until I can pass it, though... sorry.

52 hours exactly by my watch. Guess he wasn't kidding.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Wed 09/04/2008 21:14:04
Emerald, if you're going to keep timing people you should change your name to 'The Clockmaster'.






Though on second thoughts.....
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Thu 10/04/2008 00:59:58
People sometimes have real lives that pop up unexpectedly. I don't think we can blame them for it. We just have to skip them.

Unless... they have logged on since then, and posted in other forums but not here. Then I think we have every right to take them out and shoot them. :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TheJBurger on Thu 10/04/2008 01:17:35
Okay, I finished my part, so I guess branch A-1 is completed.

Are we going to post it now or wait for the other branches? And if so, does anybody want me to e-mail it to them so they can host it?

Off the top of my head I don't know of any good hosting sites myself.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Thu 10/04/2008 01:27:56
Quote from: TheJBurger on Thu 10/04/2008 01:17:35
Okay, I finished my part, so I guess branch A-1 is completed.

Are we going to post it now or wait for the other branches? And if so, does anybody want me to e-mail it to them so they can host it?

Off the top of my head I don't know of any good hosting sites myself.

Oooh, that's awesome!!  ;D I thought you said not to expect anything anytime soon, it's great to get things when you least expect it!

Yes you can upload it I guess? Andail said there was no need for the stories to be published at the same time. But maybe you want to wait for his confirmation.

As for the upload space, how about hosting it here (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/upload/upload.html)? The previous story was uploaded there too I think  :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Thu 10/04/2008 01:52:08
Wherever it is hosted, I reckon we should have it so that each branch appears on a new page, so that the first page is Vinces introduction, then there are links to branches A and B which in turn have links to A1&A2 and B1&B2 respectively...

That should be doable on 2dadventure.com, but I'd be happy to rig it up on my site if it's not.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Thu 10/04/2008 09:38:47
Actually, send it to me and I'll make a little webpage of it, roughly like Stupot suggested.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Akatosh on Thu 10/04/2008 17:00:56
Quote from: Emerald on Wed 09/04/2008 20:56:23
Quote from: Akatosh on Mon 07/04/2008 16:56:16
Received. Might take some time until I can pass it, though... sorry.

52 hours exactly by my watch. Guess he wasn't kidding.

I wasn't. But I've finally finished eventually and passed it to venus. Sorry for the delay, everyone.  :-[
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: [Cameron] on Thu 10/04/2008 17:45:20
Did you remind Venus that he's finishing it seeing Jelfish is gone? Also, where the hell are the other two stories? :P
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Venus on Thu 10/04/2008 18:27:32
Hey guys,

I just got back from my trip and just wanted to report back that I have received the story and will add my bit tomorrow.
So, I'm writing the ending now? Oh dear...

I'll report back tomorrow once the thing is done.
Cheers!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Fri 11/04/2008 09:36:30
Just got it from Afflict.

Expect something tomorrow afternoon, Andail.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Fri 11/04/2008 11:36:32
Update:

                                                       Vince_Twelve
                                                        rock_chick
                                           /                                       \
                            Babar                                                  Jack Sheehan
                           Stupot                                                   Tuomas
                     brokenbutterfly                                           Antonio
                          auriond                                                   enveloop
                 /                      \                                             /                      \
[Cameron]                   LGM                                   Eggie                 Pixelperfect
FSi                                voh                                   Jon                     Akatosh
Candall                       Afflict                                 Emerald                Venus
TheJBurger                 Moony                            lo_res_man             Jelfish
                                    Andail


Think we should skip Eggie yet? Or is it on Jon now?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Fri 11/04/2008 14:28:50
Looking at it now, if Eggie's the last to fall out, it's not too bad, actually :)

Glad to see our branch is moving forward with everyone intact.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Fri 11/04/2008 16:19:40
Could you remove the hyphen in my name, Emerald?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Fri 11/04/2008 18:21:12
Quote from: TwinMoon on Fri 11/04/2008 16:19:40
Could you remove the hyphen in my name, Emerald?

*shrug* Sure, if it means that much to you...


So, as far as I can tell, here's what's happening next:

1) Someone needs to contact Antonio and tell him to re-send the file to Jon
OR
     PixelPerfect/Akatosh/Venus sends the file (sans their additions) to Jon

2) TwinMoon sends the file on to Andail, to finish part A-2

3) Venus finishes part B-2 and sends it to Andail to add to his site
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Cino on Fri 11/04/2008 18:32:41
Quote from: Emerald on Fri 11/04/2008 18:21:12
3) Venus adds his addition and sends it on to Jelfish (why has Venus seemed to miss that? or am I missing something?) to finish part B-2

You might have missed this:

Quote from: Jack Sheehan on Wed 09/04/2008 17:35:40
I think Jelfish will have to be skipped aswell. He hasn't signed in since march 21st.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Fri 11/04/2008 19:21:22
Ah-right-cha.


Oh yeah, and I think it would be best if all 4 story branches were posted simultaneously. Otherwise, it'll be unfair on the others, since the part B-1 folks (Jon, lo_res and I) will have an advance on the story (since we'll be able to read the first half of the story before it's even our go)

I don't know if that really matters, but we're probably better off keeping things even...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Candall on Fri 11/04/2008 22:34:51
Quote from: Emerald on Fri 11/04/2008 19:21:22
I don't know if that really matters, but we're probably better off keeping things even...

As eager as I am to read the finished products, I agree.  It would also prevent the more complete branches and limbs from influencing the growth of the others.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Sat 12/04/2008 03:01:12
Well maybe Andail thought that uploading the stories one at a time would be nice in the sense that those done writing could read the finished product (whole Branch A-1, Branch A-2 except Andail, Branch B up to Antonio and Branch B-2 except Venus)  :). Then have a laugh, and see how ideas diverged. As for those who haven't added their part yet, they aren't supposed to read it... but it's true that if one branch is uploaded, it'd be hard to resist the temptation of peeking. So I agree, we can wait!

By the way, Venus is a girl... I wouldn't assume otherwise from the name  ??? and her profile confirms it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Sat 12/04/2008 08:45:09
Twinmoon, I still haven't received your document. Have you sent it? Did you write the right address?
It's petterlj at yahoo dot se
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Sat 12/04/2008 09:41:43
Quote from: TwinMoon on Fri 11/04/2008 09:36:30
Expect something tomorrow afternoon, Andail.

I'm working on it now. Just thought I'd get your e-mail address up front.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Sat 12/04/2008 09:53:59
Oh sorry for stressing you.
Thought you wrote that the day before yesterday, for some strange reason.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Venus on Sat 12/04/2008 11:43:15
Quote from: brokenbutterfly on Sat 12/04/2008 03:01:12
By the way, Venus is a girl... I wouldn't assume otherwise from the name  ??? and her profile confirms it.
Indeed, I am.

Anyway, I have just finished the story of branch B2 and sent it to Andail. It really is a shame that Jellfish dropped out. Somehow the story seemed to just take off properly and now I had to draw it to a rather abrupt ending which I'm afraid is not exactly top-notch either. I think I completely failed the satire part. But well, it was fun writing...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Sat 12/04/2008 12:28:46
Ok, I've sent it to Andail.

@ emerald: Moony?
Did you read too much comics with Spider-man and Moonknight?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Sat 12/04/2008 13:06:08
Ok, got Venus' part and Twinmoon's, which I'm gonna finish soon enough.
When I get the fourth part, I'll upload them all together.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Sat 12/04/2008 13:26:16
Does anyone know where the fourth bit is?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Sun 13/04/2008 00:03:31
I don't know if anyone has bothered to PM Antonio (he thought he was done and had passed it on) or Eggie (he seems to not have noticed that he has it, maybe it got caught in the spam filter as .rtf files are wont to do) so I've gone ahead and PMed them both.

We'll see if Eggie can write his bit and send it on before Antonio skips him.  Otherwise, on to Jon.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sun 13/04/2008 22:27:19
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sun 13/04/2008 00:03:31
We'll see if Eggie can write his bit and send it on before Antonio skips him.  Otherwise, on to Jon.

If neither respond we can always take the B-2 branch and strip away the B-2 additions.

Quote from: TwinMoon on Sat 12/04/2008 12:28:46
@ emerald: Moony?
Did you read too much comics with Spider-man and Moonknight?

Heh, you're the only person I've ever seen who spells Spider-Man correctly.
But I was thinking more of the Harry Potter character played by Brendan Gleeson.

Edit: No, wait, I wasn't. Different character.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Mon 14/04/2008 07:10:13
In the interest of getting this completed, I'm PMing Pixelperfect to ask him to send the story without his modifications on to Jon (as per Emerald's fine suggestion), who has been active in the forums and hopefully will get B-1 movin'.

Hope I'm not stepping on anyone's toes.

Jon, you're still with us, right?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: PixelPerfect on Mon 14/04/2008 08:41:30
I sent the story how I got it from Antonio to Jon just now.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jon on Mon 14/04/2008 17:08:42
Don't worry i'm still here  :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Tue 15/04/2008 11:24:08
Ok, I'm done with my part now...I chose to write a rather absurd ending, as there were too many loose ends to tie with so few words...I still had to exceed my word limit a bit, or it would be completely nonsensical.

I still enjoyed the story, though.

Awaiting the last story now, and then I'll publish them.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Tue 15/04/2008 14:14:30
Gee, I find it hard to keep myself in my pants.


Also, I'm a bit excited about the results of the stories.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Tue 15/04/2008 17:33:23
I'm keen to see how A-2 was wrapped up :)

Can't wait!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Tue 15/04/2008 18:43:21
Updizzo:

                                                       Vince_Twelve
                                                        rock_chick
                                           /                                       \
                            Babar                                                  Jack Sheehan
                           Stupot                                                   Tuomas
                     brokenbutterfly                                           Antonio
                          auriond                                                   enveloop
                 /                      \                                             /                      \
[Cameron]                   LGM                                   Eggie                 Pixelperfect
FSi                                voh                                   Jon                     Akatosh
Candall                       Afflict                                 Emerald                Venus
TheJBurger                 Moony                            lo_res_man             Jelfish
                                    Andail


Waiting for Jon to send it on. Been 34 hours, 2 minutes (No pressure, just being consistent in my time nazism...)



Maaan, the suspense is killing me. Being one of the last is even worse than being one of the first. I have absolutely no idea what this is going to be about...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Tue 15/04/2008 19:08:26

Quote from: Andail on Tue 15/04/2008 11:24:08I chose to write a rather absurd ending, as there were too many loose ends to tie with so few words...

I can't blame you  ;D

I'm most excited about how the other stories turned out.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Wed 16/04/2008 00:42:31
By the way, any news from those who dropped out as to why? Was it because of loss of interest, lack of time, or are they still AWOL? Just curious...  :-[

Can't wait to read all the stories!! Especially Branch B which I haven't seen at all.

Quote from: Emerald on Tue 15/04/2008 18:43:21
Maaan, the suspense is killing me. Being one of the last is even worse than being one of the first. I have absolutely no idea what this is going to be about...

I totally understand you, maybe next time you could say you want to be at the beginning  :) ... but TwinMoon and lo_res_man asked not to be at the end, and look where they are now... oh well it's worth a try  ;D
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Wed 16/04/2008 07:47:26
And I asked to be at the end!  :P

Perhaps next time, bribes are in order.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jon on Wed 16/04/2008 14:25:24
Really sorry guys I won't be able to write my part as i've just been given a heap of work to do. Sorry if i've let anybody down  :(
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: SSH on Wed 16/04/2008 14:39:44
Presumably you've passed it on to Emerald, then...?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Wed 16/04/2008 14:42:26
heh, that's the 4th missing from the complete branch B-2 :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Thu 17/04/2008 00:13:28
All right! It's moving on, finally :)

I can't wait to see all four stories!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Thu 17/04/2008 12:19:17
Got it! Reading through it now...

Just wondering - is lo_res still ready and willing, or should I be writing an ending? (after all this I'm hesitant to make presumptions)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Thu 17/04/2008 12:35:58
Best to PM him and find out.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Thu 17/04/2008 14:16:09
Well, I finished and sent it on to him.

If he ends up not coming around, I can always change my addition to a more definitive ending...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Fri 18/04/2008 16:39:21
So close....
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: lo_res_man on Sat 19/04/2008 02:26:58
I apologize, I haven't really been checking my email, the 10,00th 'fr3lk 8i 2le7' wemail rather grates on the soul, as well I had rather forgotten about this, my apologies. I will get right on it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Sat 19/04/2008 11:32:51
Quote from: lo_res_man on Sat 19/04/2008 02:26:58
I apologize, I haven't really been checking my email, the 10,00th 'fr3lk 8i 2le7' wemail rather grates on the soul, as well I had rather forgotten about this, my apologies. I will get right on it.

Wahey! I can almost taste it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Sat 19/04/2008 12:17:35
You got any ideas for the follow-up Andail?
I was thinking of having one where one person begins a story with a character, who meets a new one (maybe walks past him in the street or serves him at the grocery shop), then the next writer has to follow that character for 200 words or so before introducing a new one.  The next writer would take that new character somewhere else, who would then meet a new one... theeen, it would be the job of the final person in the list to have his character go full circle and reintroduce the character who started it all...

What do you reckon?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sat 19/04/2008 15:50:57
I was thinking that we should have substitutes/people who are designated to take over for those of us that will (inevitably, it seems) not be able to meet the deadline. So we could have the normal list, and then a concurrent list of substitutes (which could have the same people on it).

For example...

Main List                Sub List
Andail                    Andail
Emerald                 Emerald
Vince                     Vince
Moony                   Moony
Stupot                   Stupot


So, the first person off the main list to be skipped will be substituted by the first person on the sub list (e.g. if Vince is skipped, Andail takes over). And the second to be skipped is subbed by the second on the sub list (e.g if Moony is then skipped, Emerald takes over). Et cetera. Or something.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Sat 19/04/2008 19:26:36
Not a bad idea, Emmy.

IMHO you only need 1-2 persons to secure the ending, if someone is skipped the next person in line can just continue the story.

- Moony
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sun 20/04/2008 00:10:30
Emmy?
Is that because my genius is worthy of an emmy?


(Meh. I'm sorry for that. I'm tired...)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Sun 20/04/2008 00:42:13
If we're giving Emerald a nickname, might I suggest "Hemorrhald"?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: vict0r on Sun 20/04/2008 01:53:52
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sun 20/04/2008 00:42:13
If we're giving Emerald a nickname, might I suggest "Hemorrhald"?

"Dickpimple"?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sun 20/04/2008 21:32:02
Haha. I hate you guys...


Quote from: vict0r on Sun 20/04/2008 01:53:52
"Dickpimple"?

And that just doesn't make sense...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Mon 21/04/2008 16:54:25
Hmm... Lo_rez is taking his sweet time. it's been about 98 hours since I sent it on, 50 since he acknowledged receiving it...

I suppose I didn't make it easy for him. The plot started out strong, then kind of meandered off for a bit -- which would have been fine if it weren't for all the skippings (ours is the shortest version) -- so I tried to ride it back to the initial point. Though the way I did it... If he manages to wrap it up in 300 words, I'll be quite impressed...

It's not that big a deal, it's just that the ending might seem somewhat abrupt, since about 900 potential words worth of plot is missing...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Mon 21/04/2008 19:03:47
Oh give the guy a break, it's not like we haven't waited before ;)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Mon 21/04/2008 21:14:25
That's exactly what I'm doing.

Pshhh.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Mon 21/04/2008 23:49:56
Hehe... come on LRM... like Dr Harold Shipman (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harold_shipman) I'm quickly losing my patients. ;)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Tue 22/04/2008 02:30:29
Quote from: Stupot on Mon 21/04/2008 23:49:56
Hehe... come on LRM... like Dr Harold Shipman (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Harold_shipman) I'm quickly losing my patients. ;)

Nice reference, Stupot  ;D

I also liked your suggestion for the next story, but TwinMoon PMed a mod to revive the writing competition, so I think we'll be writing short stories every one of us. But if there's a new collab thing too, I'll be sure to join!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Tue 22/04/2008 11:13:57
Actually, I must insist that Lo-res finish the story and send it now.
A lot of people are waiting and this has already taken long enough.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Tue 22/04/2008 20:52:03
Quote from: Andail on Tue 22/04/2008 11:13:57
Actually, I must insist that Lo-res finish the story and send it now.
A lot of people are waiting and this has already taken long enough.

What happens if he doesn't? Will I send the story on unfinished, or will I finish it myself, or what?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Tue 22/04/2008 22:28:40
Then the world will explode and we will all die!!!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Thu 24/04/2008 06:39:59
Surely lo_res has had enough time to finish it by now? I really want to see the stories. :(
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: LGM on Thu 24/04/2008 06:51:45
/me explodes
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Thu 24/04/2008 08:52:54
/me Cleans up LGM's remains and then explodes

Previous chain story: 22 people - 19 days
This go: Four teams with at most 11 people from the start to each ending: 24 days and counting
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Thu 24/04/2008 15:14:42
Quote from: lo_res_man on Sat 19/04/2008 02:26:58
I had rather forgotten about this, my apologies. I will get right on it.

Treachery most foul!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Thu 24/04/2008 21:53:29
I have to admit I'm getting rather sick of waiting for lo_res_man to do his part. I check back a couple times a day to see if there's finally a conclusion, but noooo :'(
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Thu 24/04/2008 22:23:59
How about we use this to our advantage and turn it into the next challenge?

Release the three finished stories separately for us all to enjoy, but then also release the unfinished story and hold a competition where we all have to finish that story in 300 words.  Then we will have a vote for the best ending, and that ending will become the official ending for branch B-1.

Anyone?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Thu 24/04/2008 23:27:23
'I whole heartedly endorse the above Idea, product or service'.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Fri 25/04/2008 00:48:05
Yeah, I'm all up for that. Anything to get this moving again. It's seriously getting real old real fast. Soon it will be the AGS Geriatric Writing Project.  ;D
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Klyptomaniac on Fri 25/04/2008 02:22:29
I'll try that
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Fri 25/04/2008 10:45:55
As much as I like lrm's avatar, it's been six days since he received it. I say publish it! (and make a contest out of the last bit)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Fri 25/04/2008 12:45:03
the B-1 branch is a bit... skeletal. There's 1,500 words so far, and about 3 people went AWOL between Antonio (at the 1,200 word mark) and I. So, I had to find a way to compensate for the 900 missing words and start wrapping things up. Things go from moving kind of slow and leisurely, to suddenly lurching forward and accelerating off...

Anyway, I sent it on to Andail with ya'll's suggestion.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: PixelPerfect on Sun 27/04/2008 07:49:01
Oh come on! This is like waiting for Duke Nukem Forever.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Sun 27/04/2008 10:57:04
Quote from: PixelPerfect on Sun 27/04/2008 07:49:01
Oh come on! This is like waiting for Duke Nukem Forever.

Or Godot.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sun 27/04/2008 21:48:52
At least, I think I sent it to Andail...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: LGM on Mon 28/04/2008 08:01:23
perhaps Andail is with Godot.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Mon 28/04/2008 10:20:22
Oh got it. It was trapped in my spam folder. Allright, here are the four stories:

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Promotion.doc
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Promotion2.doc
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/promotion3.doc
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/promottion12.doc

Unfortunately, they're not in the right order here, I will take care of that when I get home from work.
A bit stressed right now!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Nikolas on Mon 28/04/2008 10:49:20
Ok!

Andail?

These 4 docs are empty! All of them!

What gives  ???
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: SSH on Mon 28/04/2008 10:56:39
Promotion3 seems to have something in it for me, but the others are empty...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Questionable on Mon 28/04/2008 11:10:10
3 looks complete, but the rest were nil'd
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Mon 28/04/2008 14:04:16
Ok, strange. How about people just published the versions they've sent to me here, and I'll put them together in the first post.

Meanwhile, enjoy the version that works.
If you can  :-\
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Akatosh on Mon 28/04/2008 16:01:39
Le exaggerated sigh.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Mon 28/04/2008 19:04:49
Wait, isn't B-1 still unfinished?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Mon 28/04/2008 23:40:45
Which branch is promotion3?

Assuming 'Commotion' is by Babar and 'Celebration' is by Stupot, it diverges from branch A-2 after that, which doesn't seem to be right since the split was after Auriond, according to the map.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Mon 28/04/2008 23:47:52
I did a bit of "Celebration", and the rest is by auriond. So promotion3 is either branch A-1 or A-2.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Mon 28/04/2008 23:59:56
I wrote the middle part of 'Commotion'.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Tue 29/04/2008 00:23:12
Ah, I see. I figured everyone wrote one chapter. Did I mention I suck at math? ;)

Then promotion3.doc is branch A-1.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Tue 29/04/2008 00:31:18
One small chapter per person would be nice!

As I told auriond, if we each write a chapter, a whole page or something, one day we'll be able to publish a book  ;D don't you think?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Tue 29/04/2008 00:54:28
Totally. But who would read such aimless writing? ;)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Tue 29/04/2008 01:04:53
Oh... you never know ;) if we keep honing our skills here, we could become more and more alike in thinking and writing style... until it is quite indistinguishable from one another... and then we will become a novel factory! An unstoppable force in the literary scene!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Tue 29/04/2008 01:24:47
(Novel factory, that immediately reminds me of Philip Parker (http://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_ss_gw?url=search-alias%3Dstripbooks&field-keywords=Philip+M.+Parker&x=0&y=0).  If you're wondering what's so special about him, check out how many books he's written.

and, some more information on this literary giant: http://news.zdnet.com/2100-9588_22-6237305.html)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Thu 01/05/2008 21:07:55
So, what's up with this?

Why aren't the other last people in the branch uploading their stories? Will we have a competition writing the last bit of branch B-1?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Jack Sheehan on Fri 02/05/2008 01:06:43
pssh I don't even care anymore, So many people fucked this one up I can't see the next one being any better.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Venus on Fri 02/05/2008 19:38:02
Sorry for the delay. I only just read that it was up to me now to upload the story. So here is the finished product of branch B2, hopefully working this time. Enjoy!

http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Promotion_B2.doc
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Tuomas on Fri 02/05/2008 22:06:01
O_o Well that's an unconventional turn in the plot. After what I wrote myself I was waiting for something completely different!

BTW, who's Liz?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Questionable on Fri 02/05/2008 22:56:48
Quote from: Tuomas on Fri 02/05/2008 22:06:01
O_o Well that's an unconventional turn in the plot. After what I wrote myself I was waiting for something completely different!

BTW, who's Liz?

Tuomas, you're a mind reader.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Vince Twelve on Sat 03/05/2008 01:17:53
I was going to wait until all the four stories were ready for reading, but I broke down and read the two that have been shown here so far.

My intentions in writing the first bit were to just provide a setting that could easily be turned into satire, and I thought that a celebrity gossip magazine would be perfect.  I thought it was interesting that neither of the branches released so far really touched on how ridiculous celeb gossip is.  One devolved into random violence and one ignored my setting and went in a different direction right away.  Regardless of my intentions, however, both branches turned out to be pleasant, if a bit cacophonous, reads.  Here were my thoughts on the first two branches:



Branch A-1:  The part with Jigger and Ollie was brilliant.  Hats off to the writers of that part!  Too bad we only heard mention of those characters later. 

I loved the idea of having different chapters with the rhyming titles!  That's the way to change first-person narrators.  Each one was fairly clear about the character it switched to.

The ending was quite nice, even though the story got a bit muddled in all the mayhem, but it was a fun muddled anyways.  I liked the big reveal at the end.

And I thought it was (unintentionally) hilarious that somehow the name of the magazine became "Employees of Undressed" because someone misread a line in my first bit!  I was saying that the employees of the magazine "Undressed" ran to the windows.  But whatever, it was funny!  :P



Branch B-2:  It's amazing how different the two stories turned out.  There were some great one-liners in this bit.  "himself or Himself" ha!

The focus on the funeral was a good idea, and I liked the two professional mourners. 

Liz?  Freudian slip?  And Chris!  His name was Chris!  I couldn't think of a good name so I just gave him an initial.  Glad someone filled in that blank.  Also, I'm glad someone followed up on the romance set up that I slipped into the start!



Well done to everyone, except for the people who delayed the hell out of this thing!  Can we see the other two now?  Please?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Sat 03/05/2008 02:41:13
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sat 03/05/2008 01:17:53
Branch A-1:  The part with Jigger and Ollie was brilliant.  Hats off to the writers of that part!

As one of them, I say: thanks! But I'm still embarrassed  :-[

I really liked your setting, Vince Twelve! Even though you wanted to write the ending, your beginning was awesome! I'm glad I wasn't the one to do it, I wonder what I would've come up with...

Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sat 03/05/2008 01:17:53
One devolved into random violence

I supposed I'm the one to blame for having fueled it with my take on Jigger? But with your two people going splat and kershplack, it was pretty violent too nah?  ;D

I like both stories so far, and can't wait for the remaining two!
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Stupot on Sat 03/05/2008 13:03:21
Quote from: brokenbutterfly on Sat 03/05/2008 02:41:13
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sat 03/05/2008 01:17:53
Branch A-1:  The part with Jigger and Ollie was brilliant.  Hats off to the writers of that part!
As one of them, I say: thanks! But I'm still embarrassed  :-[

Me too. Thanks Vince.  Your part was equally good considering you had the task of working out what the hell a "contemporary urban satire" is supposed to be like.

I thought the stories both came out very well, it's a shame the whole process was a farce... we need to be more disciplined and only those who fully intend to participate should put their names down... I know we can't account for unforeseen circumstances, but people should just think about it for a few minutes before saying "Count me in..."
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Babar on Sat 03/05/2008 13:52:18
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sat 03/05/2008 01:17:53
Branch A-1:  The part with Jigger and Ollie was brilliant.  Hats off to the writers of that part!  Too bad we only heard mention of those characters later. 
As the originator of those two, I have to agree with you. It's hilarious how they were developed.

I was happy that when I put a chapter name at the beginning, people got the idea and continued with it, although my reasoning was simply that I wanted to play with some other characters, and the first person narrative would have made that difficult otherwise.

While I can't think of either branch being 'better' than the other, B2 is definitely the more sane and clearer story :D.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Akatosh on Sat 03/05/2008 14:57:31
Quote from: Vince Twelve on Sat 03/05/2008 01:17:53
Liz?  Freudian slip?

Actually, it's not quite freudian. I had spent some hours of that day studying stuff about a book since there was an important test upcoming and I knew virtually nothing about it. The female main character / love interest of that book was named "Elisabeth", and given my ineptitude when it comes to names, I somehow got it mixed up with Margret from the chain story. Still...  :-[
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Sat 03/05/2008 15:01:33
I'd really, really like to see what A-2 turned into. Andail?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sat 03/05/2008 16:57:40
Well, I suppose there's no hope of lo_res_man coming back with an ending. And even Andail seems to have gone AWOL.

So, I'll just post the B-1 branch as-is and you can make up the ending in your own heads...

Promotion (B-1) (http://www.mediafire.com/?mty6ww0mmyt)



Edit: B-2 seems to be corrupted. It's 90KBs (which seems oddly big) and no matter what word processor I load it on to it either rejects the file or locks up...
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Questionable on Sat 03/05/2008 21:43:43
Is there anywhere else you can host that Emerald? It's asking me to register and I don't really feel like it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: nihilyst on Sun 04/05/2008 03:38:02
I'm not registered there, and the download works for me.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: TwinMoon on Sun 04/05/2008 12:08:04
I can download B-1 as well, and I'm not registered on Mediafire (never will be either).
To satisfy your curiosities almost, here's A-2 (http://fileden.com/files/2008/3/25/1835627/AGStale-1b.rtf) minus Andails ending, but with an exciting cliffhanger.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: voh on Sun 04/05/2008 12:32:06
Thanks, twinmoon, that was fun to read :)

Hope to see the finished branch one of these days.

This writing comp didn't quite... Work out, did it.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Candall on Sun 04/05/2008 17:44:49
I'm probably the primary culprit in the muddled state of A-1.  Sorry about that.  I was trying to get everyone to converge in one or two places for the end chapter and fix some potential timeline problems, but I guess I just made it worse. :=
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Mon 05/05/2008 21:36:41
Quote from: voh on Sun 04/05/2008 12:32:06
This writing comp didn't quite... Work out, did it.

Yet the end result still seems of better quality than the last.


I was thinking of some ideas to rectify the 'missing link' problems for next time. I shall number them for easy critiquing/ripping apart...


1. Pre-assign substitutes to jump in and take over for anyone who misses the deadline, which should be enforced better, for smoother progression. Make sure everyone who signs up understands that if they miss the deadline, they will be subsituted -- no waitsies. That should make them more attentive.

2. Assign a referee - someone who's dedicated and frequently checks up on the competition - to keep things moving. Whenever you send the document on down to the next person, you also send it to the ref. That way, the ref will always have an up-to-date copy. If/when somebody misses the deadline, the ref sends the up-to-date copy to the next person in line, and also sends a notice to the skippee informing them they've been skipped and to feel ashamed.

3. Use a first-come, first-serve policy rather than a list which is drawn up weeks before the actual competition. Quite simply, when someone finishes their part, they post up "I'm finished! Who's next?", and then they hand off the document to the first person to shout "Me! Memememimilol" and the chain continues like that.

4. We forgo the document files and emails and just use the forum thread, like normal people. At the beginning, the thread-starter sets out the genre, the word limit per post, and how many posts until the story ends, and how many posts are allowed per writer (for example: modern fantasy, 500 words maximum per post, ends on the 25th post, one post per person).


Whatcha think?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: FSi++ on Tue 06/05/2008 16:01:09
Quote from: Emerald on Mon 05/05/2008 21:36:41
4. We forgo the document files and emails and just use the forum thread, like normal people. At the beginning, the thread-starter sets out the genre, the word limit per post, and how many posts until the story ends, and how many posts are allowed per writer (for example: modern fantasy, 500 words maximum per post, ends on the 25th post, one post per person).

That's fine except one thing: someone might be faster in writing than you are (e.g. post his view on that part of the story, which might be different from one of yours).
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Wed 07/05/2008 00:02:44
Quote from: FSi on Tue 06/05/2008 16:01:09
That's fine except one thing: someone might be faster in writing than you are (e.g. post his view on that part of the story, which might be different from one of yours).

True enough. It would be a bitch to write a full 500 words, only to have the red warning message pop up.

Maybe if you 'reserve' the spot first, then immediately edit it with your addition it would help that though.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Thu 08/05/2008 00:49:48
Not all the branches have been uploaded, have they? Where are the missing ones?
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: brokenbutterfly on Sat 10/05/2008 22:59:59
Yes they have, you have to do a little bit of searching though. Here you go:

A-1  (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/promotion3.doc)
A-2  (http://fileden.com/files/2008/3/25/1835627/AGStale-1b.rtf) (without Andail's ending)
B-1  (http://www.mediafire.com/?mty6ww0mmyt)
B-2  (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Promotion_B2.doc)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: auriond on Sun 11/05/2008 01:27:23
Ah thank you, I didn't download branch A-2 because I was waiting for Andail to patch up the ending. That sort of translated into more than one missing branch somehow. Thanks :)
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Emerald on Sun 11/05/2008 16:56:25
Quote from: brokenbutterfly on Sat 10/05/2008 22:59:59
Yes they have, you have to do a little bit of searching though. Here you go:

A-1  (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/promotion3.doc)
A-2  (http://fileden.com/files/2008/3/25/1835627/AGStale-1b.rtf) (without Andail's ending)
B-1  (http://www.mediafire.com/?mty6ww0mmyt)
B-2  (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/Promotion_B2.doc)

B-1 doesn't have Lo_res_man's ending, either.
Title: Re: Now opened! The AGS grandiose writing project, starting now!
Post by: Andail on Thu 15/05/2008 09:13:44
Just want to add that my ending was added in time, but apparently the file didn't upload properly.

Here's the entire A-2.
http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/andysend.doc (http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/andysend.doc)