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Title: Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Sat 10/04/2004 23:18:07
You know? Sometimes is good to laugh of yourself...

I'm the typo master. It has annoyed me often, but it's my fault, I've been the man who never really worried about learning how many "p" the word opinion has.

It's time to sollute that... In this week you'll have to opportunity to bring back that mistakes. Paint in the following frame...
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/SpriteJamAprilSheet.gif)
...Something that can turn into something completely different because of one typo... The funnier, the better, but remember that the correct sentence has to be at the left and the uncorrect has to be written at the top, on the right space.

Have in mind that I'll punctuate... 100 points as much for the sprite quality, and 100 as maximus for how fun it is for me...

Each letter over the typical one-word typo will result in minus 5 points...

For example: If the sprite consists in me confussing shIp with shEEp (a two letters typo, instead of one) the maximus punctuation will be 195.

If you don't really like the topic, (you are "PirateJackish", we could say), the theme will be "SPORTS"... Feel free to paint an epic sprite of a sportman! (But have in mind that the maximus possible punctuation will be 180, my sprite jam, my rules, so, if you wanna win think in funny typos). Also have in mind that the size for this will necessarilly be smaller (100X100) as there's only one sprite to paint, not 2.

No more restrictions, animate them, use all the colors you need... and good Sprite Jam.

EXAMPLE:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/FarlSprite10April.gif)

P.S: All the spites will be punctuated ASAP, and you will decide the final winner if draws.
P.S.S: The typos can also consist in omitting letters, of course...
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos.
Post by: Inkoddi on Sun 11/04/2004 00:43:32
here, a quick one (happy now? ;))

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/nisseapa.png)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos.
Post by: Nacho on Sun 11/04/2004 00:50:06
I am very happy for this nice first entry!

Inkoddi has reached the following punctuation:

Tecnical level: 87
+
Originallity: 75
=
162.
Penalty (-0)

TOTAL: 162.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos.
Post by: Moox on Sun 11/04/2004 01:07:17
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/gaurd.PNG)

I know its not that good lol
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos.
Post by: Nacho on Sun 11/04/2004 01:18:34
ROTFL!!! YOu made a typo in the "Farlander's typos Sprite Jam"!!!

Your Guard... Is called "Gaurd"...

Ok... let's see...

Tecnical level: 62
Originallity:68 (A guard for sale is quite hilarious...)
=
130.
Penalty (-5)

Total=125.

Great entries so far! Now, gotta go to bed, but keep posting!  :D
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos.
Post by: Bryan on Sun 11/04/2004 09:04:56
What's the dead line?

I had an idea for "Papa Smurf" -> "Pop a Smurf"... but it turned out too gruesome... I'm working on something else.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Sun 11/04/2004 09:20:44
Till April 18th. now in topic, excuse me.  :)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: YOke on Mon 12/04/2004 01:54:35
Yay!
My first entry in the Sprite Jam!
Saw this in General today, an I just couldn't help myself.
(Kind of nervous about misspelling anything here...)
(http://home.no.net/thanma/the_cell/sindrome.png)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Layabout on Mon 12/04/2004 06:36:03
Wow Farl, you impress me. This is the most innovative sprite jam ever.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Mon 12/04/2004 07:42:43
YOke, that was hard to catch! So... there is a dome where Peter Pan and the others commit sins! that's pretty nasty!  ;) I should have included an over-score for using real typos, but I'm pretty angry against you now, so... ;D

Unfortunately, I have to consider that this is a two-word typo.  :-\

Let me see...

Tecnical level: 87.
+
Originallity: 80.
=
167.
Penalty(-5)

TOTAL: 162.

Oh! We have a draw till the moment! Let's wait if someone reaches the top...

P.S: Thanks Pirate Jack.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Privateer Puddin' on Mon 12/04/2004 11:12:22
Not very good :/

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/SpriteJamAprilSheetCustard.PNG)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Mon 12/04/2004 11:50:20
Ah! the joke is quite good, and, indeed... changing  "hello" by "hey! hooker, how's it going?" is quite funny, it deserves a high punctuation, but undestand that the overall will necessarilly be less than thw two guys leading, this are ripped graphics (Which is ok for games, like MI 1.5 don't missunderstood me...) ;D

Technical level: 40.
Originallity: 95.
=
135.
Penalty(0).

TOTAL=135.

Good work! and have in mind that nobody reached more than 162... A supperb sprite about sports could reach 180 and win... have it in consideration if you can't think in a typo...
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Mon 12/04/2004 12:32:16
(http://www.twin-design.com/ags/graphics/spritejam_april112004.gif)

As witnessed in this old thread ... HERE (http://www.agsforums.com/yabb/index.php?board=8;action=display;threadid=11993)

Not my best effort ... but I'm ill :(
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Eggie on Mon 12/04/2004 12:41:58
Most improbable typo EVAR! (http://eggie.sphosting.com/balls.gif)

EDIT:  Not an entry  (http://eggie.sphosting.com/thehell.GIF)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Rincewind on Mon 12/04/2004 13:25:12
Okeydokey, here goes...

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spritetypo.gif)
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/spritetypo.gif)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Mon 12/04/2004 14:04:25
Great entries, but the one that made me laugh most hase been Darth Mandarb's, because it is a REAL FARLANDER's typo and I remember it... clearly... Painfully clear...  :-[
(Confussing Painfully with Fainfully is not a typo, just the effect of posting very, very late!) >:(

Unfortunately for Jeremy, it's very known by everybody that he is my friend (A very close one...) and he's not going to be compete, sorry...  :'(

Eggie's joke is nice, a little bit nasty, but cool... but being as good as some others, I can't really say it reached its tecnical level, sorry...  :-\

Tec: 65
+
Ori: 70
=
135.

Penalty(0) yeah, it's needed to stroke twice to make that typo, but one was the space bar, and he was not going to win in any case, so, I've been gentle...
TOTAL=135.

Rincewind: Also, very funny and imaginative, and well solluted tecnically... It does not still reach the level of some previous sprite jams, but it definitelly deserves a good note.

Tec=75
+
Ori=70
=
145, with no penalty...

PS: Somebody is annoyed to receive points? Maybe is a little bit cruel to loose all the hopes of victory too soon? I think it's quite fair and appealing, but if someone does not lie, make me know...

(I meant... someone reasonable, no nippled signature members)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Ali on Tue 13/04/2004 00:17:11
There are two typos here, I don't know if that's allowed, but they are really common mistakes, and I think I've seen you make them Farlander. Are you sure it was a good idea to start a thread where people point out your errors?

I feel like I'm being unkind.

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/typo.gif)
The animation is a little more manic than I intended. And the blue dots don't look much like sweat beads. Never mind.

Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: rtf on Tue 13/04/2004 02:56:04

This could very much be the most pathetic piece of art I have ever done in my life:

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/sobadikillsomething.png)


I am sorry you had to see that.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Peter Thomas on Tue 13/04/2004 05:50:44
Quote from: I guarantee that the frogs will be relased eventually. on Tue 13/04/2004 02:56:04
I am sorry you had to see that.

Yes, but your new name more than makes up for it. I love it...
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Kairus on Tue 13/04/2004 06:28:00
I remember making a typo like this one when I went to English classes.

(http://www.masterfxgames.com/Garfield/brake.gif)

PS: Do you say make a typo or do a typo or what?
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Tue 13/04/2004 08:08:34
Ali... Of course it's a good idea to have some fun on my own... and I am learning! I was sure that when you can't find something you were "loosing it"... Thanks to your entry I won't commit that mistake again!  :D
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Chicky on Tue 13/04/2004 11:01:28
here you go, not a hard typo to make (especially when your drunk ;))

(http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v54/oversizedchicken/tinywinkie.gif)

Tinky Winky - Tiny Winky

*edit* about the legs and background, it was late and i was tiered of looking at pictures of tiny winky .... err i mean tinky winky ;)

-OSC
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Tue 13/04/2004 11:19:37
Now here it comes the time for the punctuations:

Ali:
Tec:78
Ori:70
Which is equal to 148, minus 5 for being a two-letter word typo (It's in the rules Ali, read them again...) so we have 143.

Kairus: Your mother tongue is Spanish isn't it? I've had problems with that words too... I think it should be unfair to penalty that your entry is a 3-letter typo word, because that tow words sound the same... It's very in the spirit of the topic, and it made me laugh... This is very subjective, I know, but I am going to rate the originallity with a 80...
Tec:70.
Ori:80.
That makes 150 with no penalty, I explained why before...

OSC: I don't really understand why winky becomes angry when tiny... It should have been funnier IMO if you painted him vert little, maybe rounded by the other teletubbies or something... so, here it's my ratings:
Tec:70
Ori:65
That makes 135 with no penalty...

So, is someone going to beat the co-leaders YOke and Inkoddi? Come on!

P.S: You'll be able to start voting for breaking the draw (if it continues) in friday...
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Chicky on Tue 13/04/2004 11:28:37
farl, winky is another word for penis rite. so if its tiny penis, instead of his normal name tinky penis then he's guna be pretty pissed that someone said he has a small dick.

you get it now?

-OSC
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: cpage on Tue 13/04/2004 11:48:27
Okay I Made two Based on typos in this very thread!
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/max.gif)
Hehehe butt joke

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/clear.gif)
Hahaha you get it? you cant see the change cause it is clear  :-\ ...... Its Funny.....hahaha.....I'm so lame ::)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Tue 13/04/2004 11:59:09
Mmmm... I get it OSC, but I don't see it as a winner... sorry... but, he...  :)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Chicky on Tue 13/04/2004 12:12:38
nah, dont worry farl. Like i said i wasREALLY tiered

great entries so far though

-OSC
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Kweepa on Tue 13/04/2004 13:05:42
This started as a comment that "punctuation" wasn't the same thing as "score".

(http://www.mccrea.demon.co.uk/step/ags/punktuation.gif)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Tue 13/04/2004 13:26:28
hehe... yup, in spanish "puntuación" works for both (score and puntuation), but, as most was I using it in this thread, less sure was I that it works in English for "score"... That was good, let me think in the SCORE...

Steve Funny... But there are better tecnical entries... 145.

CPage: That was not a typo, as seen inthe edit, I did that post at a very nasty hour... I thought it was a misstyping, but he... the "p" is faaaar away from the "F"... I guess I was very sleepy.

your ranking is: 135.

Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: DGMacphee on Wed 14/04/2004 14:19:44
(http://www.sylpher.com/DGMacphee/Photoshop/SpriteJamAprilSheet.gif)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Wed 14/04/2004 14:31:54
Oh... this has been the funniest and  tecnically the best entry so far... unfortunatelly the penalty of -20 makes it fall to the sencond place!

:-\ Mmmf... Sorry about that Daniel...  ;D
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: DGMacphee on Wed 14/04/2004 14:36:39
That's okay, I knew I wasn't going to win cause the competition was rigged.

That and politics. Always politics.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: SSH on Wed 14/04/2004 15:04:30
Great joke, bad drawing...
(http://www.freeweb.telco4u.net/superscottishhero/felt.gif)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: BOYD1981 on Wed 14/04/2004 16:57:38
(http://www.btinternet.com/~boyd1981/sumseck.gif)

I CAN'T DO SUMS, ECK!! - I CAN DO SOME SEX!!

Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Haddas on Wed 14/04/2004 17:21:04
http://img29.photobucket.com/albums/v86/Haddas/Critiscism%20objects/lucentdreams.gif
(http://img29.photobucket.com/albums/v86/Haddas/Critiscism%20objects/lucentdreams.gif)

P.S: Note the lens flaer
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: La Lore on Wed 14/04/2004 19:21:45
Here it is mine! but I won't be ranked, because this week's host is my boyfriend...  :'(

It is inspired in a sticker I saw, with a sheep using its own wool as a parachute...

(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/SpriteJamAprilSheet_Lore.gif)

Farlander has helped me a lot little, yelling to me because I was not doing it well...

Lorena.

:-*
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: SSH on Wed 14/04/2004 19:34:23
Heh, my wife used to have an English pronunciation book and tape for Spanish people called "Ship or Sheep"... and the stereotypical movie mexican says "Here eeet eees"...

On the other hand, I get a good excuse when my wife asks for keys!  ;)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Eggie on Wed 14/04/2004 19:39:18
Haddas: That Jell-O picture is awesomely hilarious if you imagine the guy in it to have your avatar as his face. In fact, I am chuckling to myself right now at the thought it. I mean, c'mon, it's like;
"Oooooooh, Jello!"

/me bursts into a fit of giggles and rolls around on the floor
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Ghormak on Wed 14/04/2004 20:02:03
(http://www.agagames.com/ghormak/epic.gif)

Yes, that's an epic landscape. Shut up.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Privateer Puddin' on Wed 14/04/2004 21:30:43
(http://www.btinternet.com/~ctswin/SpriteJamAprilSheetCustardo.PNG)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: on Wed 14/04/2004 22:56:58
(http://screen7.adventuredevelopers.com/fun/sjam.gif)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: dasjoe on Wed 14/04/2004 22:59:48
privateer puddin's post reminds me of this rest in pieces joke.. too bad..
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: InCreator on Thu 15/04/2004 03:35:59
Does missing a letter counts as "typo"?
(http://www.hot.ee/increatorgamez/sjam.gif)

Privateer Puddin's first entry is the best, IMO!
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Thu 15/04/2004 03:39:44
Quote from: InCreator on Thu 15/04/2004 03:35:59
Does missing a letter counts as "typo"?
Actually, I think that's closer to the actual definition of a typo.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: InCreator on Thu 15/04/2004 03:41:20
Well, in his example, Farlander *changed* a letter, not *missed* it.
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Thu 15/04/2004 23:52:29
Missing letters also count as a typo, it's my second Post Sript in the first post...

I am "tyred" of scoring... tomorrow I'll give them all... the "punctuations"...

"Greet" entries, BTW...
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Mr_Frisby on Fri 16/04/2004 05:16:24
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/SpriteJam.GIF)

I like fiddling with my diction. :-X
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Peter Thomas on Fri 16/04/2004 06:04:57
That's really good, Frisby.

I must say - as funny as everyone else's was, I do appreciate the subtle difference of a comma! Great work!

And yes, I'm happy...
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Nacho on Fri 16/04/2004 12:44:19
I had enough of rating... I have feeling you know!?! :'( I can't rate you!!!

I can't really decide, but Firsby is leading...

SEMPRINIIIII!!!
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: ElectricMonk on Fri 16/04/2004 13:00:30
Quote
SEMPRINIIIII!!!

OUT!
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. MR. FRISBY WINS!!1
Post by: Nacho on Sun 18/04/2004 19:09:44
DG was leading, because it was obviously the best, because of the penalty.

Lorena was also going to win, but she is my girlfriend and it would have been suspicious.  ;D

M0ds entry has been the funniest IMO, but:

Mr. Frisby wins, because it's best balance with tecnica and humour.

Thanks for all the maravelous entries.  :)
Title: Re:Sprite Jam... Farlander´s typos. (Till april 18)
Post by: Mr_Frisby on Mon 19/04/2004 04:05:22
Wow - I can't believe it - DG youse was robbed. I wet my pants when I saw yours . Hmm What to do for the next one . .

Anyway I liked all the entries this weekand don't envy Farlander in having to choose. This is why it is bad to have such a fun and interestic topic - you get so many people hating you for not winning (if I had not won I would have had to stalk and kill Farlander (lucky for him)) - This is why I vow to keep up my tradition of boring stupid Spritejams that no one enters - its just easier that way  :P.