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Mephistophilis

It's been 20 mins, why do I think it's senstionally long? there goes the trophy!
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Ginny

#21
Sorry bout that, I had to go to sleep :P
It did turn out rather long though. Here it is:

Items used:
Bottled Love
A tooth
A drill
An out of date magazine
A pen
A rubber glove
A name tag
A lollipop
A rope (added)

Starts with:
(none)

<INTRO>
You and your mom enter the waiting room...
Mom: "Sit down, Curt, I'll be right there."
Mom walks to the reception desk while you sit down.
Mom: "bla bla"
Receptionist: "bla bla bla"
Mom: "bla bla... not available?"
Mom signs a form and sits down next to you.
You: "What did she say?"
Mom: "Nothing for you to worry about, my boy, let's just wait for your turn, ok?"
</INTRO>

LOCATION: WAITING ROOM

TALK TO MOM
You: "Mum?"
Mom: "Mm?"
<DIALOG>
1. I'M GOING TO SEE MY USUAL DOCTOR, RIGHT?
Mom: "No, Dr. Mayands is busy today, you're going to see Dr. Drille."
You: "What? But I don't want to go to Dr. Drille!"
Mom: "You'll see the doctor like everyone else here, there's no reason moving our appointmentÃ,  because a doctor is busy."
You: "But.."
Mom: "No buts, I don't want to hear another word about it."
(Dialog option 2 is activated)
(Dialog option 3 is activated)
(Dialog option 4 is activated)

2. WHERE IS DR. MAYANDS NOW?
You: "Why is he busy?"
Mom: "That is none of our concern."

3. CAN'T WE COME BACK ANOTHER DAY?
Mom: "No, we came today and you'll get your treatment today. It's your fault you got your teeth to this state."
You: "But I.."
Mom: "But nothing."

4. I LOVE YOU MUM!
Mom: "I love you too, Curty."
You: "Now can we go home?"
Mom: "No."

5. WELL, SEE YOU
Mom: "Where exactly do you think you're going?"
You: "Nowhere! I was just ending the conversation."
Mom: "Whatever you say dear."
</DIALOG>

LOOK AT MAGAZINE STAND
"It's full of crappy fashion magazines."

LOOK AT OUT OF DATE MAGAZINE
"It doesn't fit in with all the new fashion mags."
"It's called 'Games Globe'"

PICK UP OUT OF DATE MAGAZINE
"This one looks nice."

LOOK AT PEN
"It's a pen with a really long thin pointy edge, like a needle."

PICK UP PEN
"Oh, damn, I can't believe I didn't notice it was chained to the desk."

LOOK AT NAME TAG
"It's an empty name tag, probably for new employees."

PICK UP NAME TAG
Receptionist: "Why do you need this name tag? You're not an employee!"

LOOK AT RECEPTIONIST
"Eugh, what's that horrid pink colour she's wearing?
"Her name tag reads 'Terry Sacret'."

TALK TO TERRY SACRET
<DIALOG>
1. HI THERE
Terry: "Hi. Do you have an appointment?"
You: "I'm here to see Dr. Mayands."
Terry: "He's unavailable today, you'll have to see Dr. Drille instead."
(Dialog option 2 is activated)

2. WHY IS DR. MAYANDS UNAVAILABLE?
Terry: "He didn't give us details, he just said he had an emergency and couldn't see any patients today. Something about a sickle."

3. WHAT'S THIS DR. DRILLE LIKE?
Terry: "He keeps to himself mostly, not a very social type, but there haven't been any complaints from patients in all his years here, and that's saying a lot."

4. SO, WHAT'S IT LIKE BEING A RECEPTIONIST?
Terry: "It's alright, it can get dull sometimes, but I get to fix the computer when it gets broken, and play a few games when no-one's watching."
You: "You play computer games?"
Terry: "Oh, yeah, I love computer games!"

5. CAN I HAVE YOUR PEN?
Terry: "It's attached to the desk, you can't just take it. It's meant for people to sign forms with."

6. WHAT ABOUT THE NAME TAG?
Terry: "What about it?"
You: "Can I have it?"
Terry: "You're only ten, and you don't work here, so I don't see why you'd need a name tag."

7. NICE TALKING TO YOU
Terry: "Same here."
</DIALOG>

GIVE OUT OF DATE MAGAZINE TO TERRY
You: "Here, maybe you'd like to read this?"
Terry: "What's this? Wow! Fate of Atlantis review! *grabs the mag and reads enthusiastically*"
You: "..."
You: "Your welcome."

STEAL PEN
"It's chained to the desk. Does noone trust people anymore?"

STEAL NAME TAG
"Yay, a blank name tag!"

WALK TO CORRIDOR TO DOCTOR'S OFFICES

LOCATION: CORRIDOR

LOOK AT TRASHCAN
"It's empty and clean."

LOOK AT DOOR TO DR. DRILLE'S OFFICE
"The sign says 'Dr. Deadley Drille'. Just his name should be a good reason to fire him!"

LOOK AT DOOR TO DR. MAYANDS OFFICE
"It says 'Dr. Safin Mayands'."

ENTER DR. DRILLE'S OFFICE
Dr. Drille: "Hey! I'm busy in here, stay out!"

WAIT FOR DR. DRILLE TO COME OUT OF HIS OFFICE AND WALK AWAY (he leaves and returns every 10 seconds or so)

ENTER DR. DRILLE'S OFFICE

LOCATION: DR. DRILLE'S OFFICE

LOOK AT DEADLY INSTRUMENTS(tm)
"Yikes! I better find a way to avoid this appointment, or I'm done for!"

LOOK AT SICKLE
"That's not part of the standart dentist equipment.."

PICK UP SICKLE
"No thank you."

LOOK AT DRILL
"Not the drill... *backs away*"

PICK UP DRILL
"This better not get set off in my pockets."

LOOK AT RUBBER GLOVE
"A rubber du.. err glove!"

PICK UP RUBBER GLOVE

LOOK AT BASKET OF TOYS
(Random message each time)
"This truck has razor-sharp blades for wheels!"
"A wind-up doll with sharp nails and teeth.."
"Eep! It's one of those trick chocolate bars, only I bet this one slices your tongue off when you try to eat the bar. Even I wouldn't play a trick like that on someone!"

PICK UP/USE BASKET OF TOYS
"No way! I'm not putting my hand in a basket of deadly toys, I'm not stupid!"
"Some of these things would make the world's greatest pranks though."

LOOK AT LOLLIPOP
"This looks rather harmless."

PICK UP LOLLIPOP
"Can't pass out on a good sweet!"

LOOK AT JAR OF TEETH
"Eww.. He's got a collection of teeth covered in blood.."

PICK UP JAR OF TEETH
"No, Yuck."

EXIT TO CORRIDOR

WALK TO WAITING ROOM

LOCATION: WAITING ROOM

USE DRILL ON PEN
"And the chain breaks free!"
*looks at Terry the receptionist*
"Wow, she didn't even notice. She must really love games."

WALK TO CORRIDOR

ENTER DR. MAYANDS' OFFICE

LOCATION: DR. MAYANDS' OFFICE

LOOK AT TOYS
"Good old Dr. Mayands has lots of toys!"

LOOK AT DRUG CABINET
"It's got all sorts of drugs and medicine in it. Like my hypochondriac uncle Carl."

OPEN DRUG CABINET
"It's locked."

LOOK AT BOTTLED LOVE
"Odd.."

USE PEN WITH LOCK
"My, isn't this a good lockpick."

OPEN DRUG CABINET
PICK UP BOTTLED LOVE
"Bottled Love, yuck."

EXIT TO CORRIDOR

LOCATION: CORRIDOR

LOOK AT DOOR TO SUPPLY CLOSET
"The sign says 'Supply closet', but there's a barely visible remainder of the words: 'M. Calavera'."

ENTER SUPPLY CLOSET
Man: *opens door*
Man: "Hey, this is a staff only area. You can't come in."
Man: *closes door*

TALT TO/ENTER SUPPLY CLOSET
<DIALOG>
Guard: *opens door*
1. HEY, CAN I COME IN?
Guard: "No. This is a staff only area, and you're not staff."
(Dialog options 2-4 are activated)

2. I'M FROM CLEANING. DON'T YOU WANT YOUR SUPPLIES NICE AND CLEAN?
Guard: "There is no need for cleaning."

3. HOW ABOUT A BRIBE?
Guard: "No way, I'm an honest worker!"
You: "I'll give you a million dollars!"
Guard: "Like you have that amount of money, kid."
You: "I will someday."
Guard: "Whatever. I don't take bribes."

4. I'LL SHOOT YOU WITH THIS GUN!
Guard: "Ha! Stop fooling around kid."

5. BYE
Guard: *closes door*
</DIALOG>

USE PEN ON NAME TAG
"I'll just write something unspecific on this, like 'Management'."

USE NAME TAG
"Yay, now I have a name tag."

ENTER SUPPLY CLOSET
Guard: "I thought I told you to stay out."
You: "I'm from the management, let me through."
Guard: "You look a bit young for management.."
You: "If you make another remark about my height, I'll fire you so fast you won't have time to say 'midget'!"
Guard: "*worried* Oh I'm so sorry sir, please come in, I'll let you examine the supplies yourself, shall I? *runs off*"

LOCATION: SUPPLY CLOSET

LOOK AT ROPE
"It's a rather long piece of rope."

PICK UP ROPE

EXIT TO CORRIDOR

ENTER DR. DRILLE'S OFFICE

LOCATION: DR. DRILLE'S OFFICE
*You suddenly hear sounds of footsteps and Dr. Drille's voice muttering*

HIDE IN LAB-COAT CLOSET
*You almost scream when you see a very authentic-looking human skeleton hanging next to you in the closet, but restrain yourself*

*Dr. Drille's enters, muttering*
Dr. Drille: "Damn idiot doctors, don't know how to handle kids. Morons."
*Dr. Drille's is about to open the closet and hang his coat in it*

JUMP OUT OF CLOSET and SMASH BOTTLED LOVE ON DR. DRILLE'S HEAD
"Whew. That was close."

DRAG DR. DRILLE TO SUPPLY CLOSET
"Gah, he's heavy. Lay off on the cheeseburgers, will you?"

LOCATION: SUPPLY CLOSET

TIE DR. DRILLE UP WITH ROPE

PUNCH DR. DRILLE IN THE TEETH
"Ha, take that!"
"Ooh, I think I knocked out one of his teeth."

PICK UP TOOTH
"I'm not touching it with my bare hands.."

USE RUBBER GLOVE
"I feel like... like I could... take on the world!!"
"Or at least keep my hands clean when I perform surgery."

PICK UP TOOTH
"This tooth shall be a souvenir from today's feats!"

TAKE OFF RUBBER GLOVE
"I better throw this away, it's covered in blood."

EXIT TO CORRIDOR

WALK TO WAITING ROOM

LOCATION: WAITING ROOM

TALK TO MOM
You: "I have a feeling Dr. Drille's going to be unavailable as well."
Mom: "Nonsense. Maybe he's just delayed."

<OUTRO>
*You wait a while, and then you see Terry the secretary make some phone calls.*
*She approaches you*
Terry: "We're very sorry you had to wait Mrs. Elevenson, but it seems Dr. Drille is unreachable, we can't find him anywhere. Please reschedule with Dr. Mayands as usual."
You: "Yay!"
</OUTRO>

<IF You eat the lollipop at any point in the game>
*You suddenly start twitching, and fall to the floor, dead.* Whoops. I guess that lollipop wasn't so harmless after all. Oh well, at least you won't have any more dental treatments.
</IF>

THE END

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Mephistophilis

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Ginny

Why thank you :)
I felt a bit stuck at some point, but figured it out. Then I felt it may be too long, but what the heck ;D.
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We may have years, we may have hours, but sooner or later, we push up flowers. - Membrillo, Grim Fandango coroner

sergiocornaga

Main character: Namless little boy
Starting with: A LOLLIPOP

IN WAITING ROOM:
-There is a magazine rack, a dodgy-looking man, an employees-only door and a receptionist
-Get Out of date (porno) mag from table
-Talk to dodgy-looking man:
  "Hello little boy..."
  "Hiya!"
  "I've got some love here"
-Dodgy-looking man pulls out BOTTLED LOVE (grubby wine bottle)
-Offer lollipop and porno mag to man to recieve BOTTLED LOVE
-use bottled love with receptionist's cuppa coffee
-steal receptionist's stuff as she slumbers (pen, nametag)
-use pen with nametag to get FAKE ILLEGAL NAMETAG IN YOUR NAME
-huzzah! now you can get into the employees only door.

IN JANITOR'S CLOSET
-this is what was behind the door... how exciting
-get stuff in a box (rubber glove, mysterious bottle)
-look at mysterious bottle: "CLEANOCLEAN. Contains Miracose-B and Ammonia"
-leave

WAITING ROOM CUTSCENE
-Oh crap... DR.DRILLE WILL SEE YOU NOW!

DR.DRILLE'S ROOM OF TERROR
-The door is locked by a massive padlock. blood stains cover the rusty steel walls. There is a back door and a sink filled with dirty water in the corner.
-Actually, the word dirty doesn't do justice to this sink.
-Dr. Drille starts talking.
  "Ah... Hello."
  *SNEEZES*
  "Oh... sorry, I get very bad alergies. Theres alot of Miracose-B in this room"
  "And I'm allergic to it. Highly allergic."
-Use mysterious bottle with Dr.Drille
  "AAAARGGGHHHH! YOU LITTLE SHIT"
  *COUGHS AND FALLS TO THE GROUND*
-Well, that's him dead... now how to get out?
-Use rubber glove with sink and find key
-Use key with padlock: DOESN'T FIT!
-Use key with back door: WOOHOO!

Walk off into the sunset...

Ginny

Great entry SURGE! That could be a wonderful horror sequence with tense music :D Btw, that sink reminds me of something.... ;)
Try Not to Breathe - coming sooner or later!

We may have years, we may have hours, but sooner or later, we push up flowers. - Membrillo, Grim Fandango coroner

sergiocornaga


Mephistophilis

#27
I vote for myself, So do my friends Fred, George, Bob, Larry ( :=), John, David, Jesus, Zeus, God, Thor, Odin, Max Payne, Ron Gilbert, Tim Schaefer, Bernard, Green Tentacle, Purple Tentacle, Weird Ed/Ted/Fred/Edna, Indiana, Satan, Scooby Doo, Dave Grossman, Guybrush, LeChuck, Voodoo Lady, Largo, Ben, Michael, Manny, Hitler, Nazi A, Nazi B, Fat Nazi, The Leather Jacket Salesman, Hoagie, Laverne, Future Tentacle....

Actually I don't want to vote...
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Mephistophilis

I vote for Gin! Wait, I mean Ginny.
But because I was first you all copied me! Heh
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Ginny

I vote for Haddas :D Kidding, I vote for Mephistophilis (:P what a name).

Btw, Tim Schafer* ;)
Try Not to Breathe - coming sooner or later!

We may have years, we may have hours, but sooner or later, we push up flowers. - Membrillo, Grim Fandango coroner

sergiocornaga

I'll vote for myself, mwahahahahahahahahahah.  ;D ;D ;D

AGS-GD

Hi,

My vote goes to Ginny ...

Haddas

Mephistophilis for my part. Ginnys might be long, but I don't like reading long things, especially with my busy life.

Mephistophilis

I only got 2?  :'( Heh It's a weird second name in my opinion but you know who I meant!
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Eggie

I vote Ginny. Meph's was pretty cool too but how many games feature a jar full of bloodstained teeth.

By the way. Voting ends on the 29th which should give the winner enough time to come up with something for the next month.

Mephistophilis

Can I change my vote to surge to give Other competitors *COUGH*me*AHEM* a chance?
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