Hello everybody!I`m so happy now ,because I bought a new Pc and now I can again join this great community:)))! ;D
I hope you should say what to improve myself,the coloring,shading etc. But not the whole style !
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EDIT: Used some advices from Darth?
And now please give me a solution of my problem :-[
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In My Second Room There Is One Light Source - The Lamp,But How Do I make it Look like it is Shining???Also need sugestions on what stuff to put in the BG???
Ã, Ã, Very Apriciated !
Yes It`a too empty because I just want to know is the style worth it ,and is it colored right.:))) I`ll fix that with the window shadow:)
i think its a very nice style, the double pixel lines really do it justice.
maybe shadow the right side of the window aswell, then the shadow will look less fake.
After that you can draw some more objects so we can give some better critique ;)
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1. This shadow should not be there unless there is a second light source inside the room.
2. Geometrically speaking, this shadow is impossible.
wow the edited room looks brilliant, really easy on the eye's.
there's not really much to crit, maybe add some depth to the mousehole?
I'm not a fan of the bright colors ...
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- changed the brightness of the colors
- added a door frame
- shortened the shadows (created too much depth before)
- altered the window (with the light coming through the windo the interior should be lighter than the shadowed side)
- added a border around the top of the walls
- altered the shadow for the table thingee
- changed the color of the rug
Your style is quite different from mine, but I like it a lot! The only thing I didn't change but thought looked wierd was the blue outline about the cup. But I thought maybe you wanted a 'blue cup' in there ... so I didn't touch it.
Hope this helped!
Thanks Darth Mandarb,I think I`ll use some thing you edit in my Bg(if you don`t mind):) But I`ll keep the colors because this is my individuality, you know (to be a little bit different):)
Anybody to suggest what things to put in this BG or is it finished???
I love the cartoony style, well done!
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- This is pretty gradiated ... but you could use the same colors and use more comical solid delineation as well.
- I would also suggest hi-lighting the edges of the door frames facing the light
Just a thought :)
The hallway reminds me of a scene in another game. I think it was the Night Before, but I am not sure.
I would prefer a sharper difference in shading than a gradient. I feel it would go with the look of the pictures more.