2 backgrounds C&C(Updated 150905)

[juasma]

Hello to all 
First sorry for my bad english, I'm spanish and my last english class was 15 years ago...   These are 2 backgrounds of my first game. It's a small game, only 5 rooms, but is for practice with AGS. The ambient of the game is a school. Critics and comments are welcome.   
   


Thanks, juasma

UPDATE 15-09-05:

These are the changes:


 
In the first one I have added perspective to the arch, in the poster I have added a title, the rest will see it when looking at the poster. 
 
In the second I have removed a floor piece and I have added a modern sculpture.

Thank you for the comments. 

[passer-by]

I like the style and the colourful rooms, but I find they are too clean for a school.

[Nikolas]

I like the style and the colourful rooms, but I find they are too clean for a school.

I guess they don't eat Tappas in schools 

No i have to say, i love your style...
Just one question, in the first picture, the poster above the bin, has something that the player should read? Cause it seems like there is something written, and not scratches, but I can't make out what...

[Kweepa]

Just one question, in the first picture, the poster above the bin, has something that the player should read?

Isn't it obvious? It says:
"Se vehicle moto con una sola pueday sin mavelar tu noogotaaqar."
Makes perfect sense.

Nice backgrounds.

[Andail]

The overall style is gorgious!
There are just some minor issues, like how the wall in the first picture has no real depth, and how there is just a tad too much floor in the second scene. You could either break it up with some objects/details, or change the composition and show just a little more of the wall. That would make the scene less squeezed, so to speak.

But overall, great job, really perfect adventure game feeling

[He-Man]

I agree with Andall.
The hole in the wall (or whatever) looks like it's painted on to the wall.
Also, I'm not really sure why but I don't really like the light from the window in the second picture.
Other than that it looks really good!

[Mordalles]

wow! i really like these backgrounds! excellently done!

[Corey]

i like the detail, well done 

[juasma]

Thanks.

Just one question, in the first picture, the poster above the bin, has something that the player should read?

The poster doesn't contain anything important for the game, it is a simple gag, but i will change it a little to read the title.

the wall in the first picture has no real depth

Yes, the wall seems that it is plane. Needs perspective.

is just a tad too much floor in the second scene.

I will think the changes that I can make with the second background.

I'm not really sure why but I don't really like the light from the window in the second picture.

I don't neither like the light, but i don't know how fix it... 


I will update the thread when i make the changes.