GUI of Ralph the Raven (need c&c!)

Started by Minimi, Tue 18/05/2004 18:27:08

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Minimi

Hi there!
I worked all day on a new GUI, for my MAGS game Ralph the Raven.
I'm pretty happy with the result, but I wonder what you think of it, and if I should spell something different or make it better?!


When the mouse is over the buttons, they will light up alittle, and this bar is shown on the bottom of the screen. This is my first own GUI, so I'd really like to hear some opinions!

thanks in advance!

ps: the bluecup, was just a quick testobject I drawed :P

Ginny

I like it a lot, nice coulouring that should fit your art nicely (as seen in the GiP forum). Only gripe would be that it's a bit hard to tell that one of the buttons says: "I.act", as in interact. Maybe replace that with use or just act..
Nice blue cup! ;)
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MrColossal

my only concern is that all the verbs we'll be using throughout the game are so small and shoved into the left side of the GUI while the buttons we won't be pressing as often are so large and in charge
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Chicky

brilliant minimi , really like it. But i think you should do what eric said.

..

Yeh I agree with whate been said.

I think U should swap the verbs with 'Help Credits and info'

It's just I dou bt I'd hardly ever use these buttons if I were playing.. If not at all

stuh505

also I think you should change "I.act" to "use" (because "Act" means something a bit different and I couldnt figure out what "I.act" was until it was mentioned here)

InCreator

Only problem with this GUI is that it's hard to read. Maybe try changing color or color different buttons with different colors so eyes can catch them by different color groups? Text is very little too.

Phemar


Here's a little paintover:



I couldn't tdo the whole GUI as I ran out of time...You can basically see what I've done.

I made the interaction buttons a wee bit too dark...whoops...I also lost some color during GIF conversion...whoops...

Peter Thomas

I really like the look of it minimi.

Zor, I like yours also, however the black on brown can be a little patronising, per se. The words walk/look etc should be the brighter ones so the focus is clear.

And yeah, as has been said, swap the sizes. Apart from that, I love it.
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AGA: "Shush, FAG!"

Minimi

Thanks for all the comments! I followed some of the advice, and this is my new GUI (with also the game graphics :P)



2X :


I've put my mousepointer on one of the buttons, to show that they light up ;)

Is this better?

Peter Thomas

Much better. I really like that. It matches the art style/colours perfectly.
Peter: "Being faggy isn't bad!"
AGA: "Shush, FAG!"

InCreator

Yes, better indeed. Maybe you could do another tiny improvement? Make text color pure white when mouse is over button!

Ginny

Yes, do that. Other than that, it's great! Nice raven, too :).
Try Not to Breathe - coming sooner or later!

We may have years, we may have hours, but sooner or later, we push up flowers. - Membrillo, Grim Fandango coroner

Darth Mandarb

Much improved!

As InCreator pointed out you might make the mouseOver a bright white (as the two muted colors get lost in one another).

Other than that, great job!  It looks promising!

Keep it up buddy!

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