Midi (some sort of doom metal -ish)

[Paper Carnival]

I've not written music for a long time. As an excuse not to study for my exam tomorrow, I took a very old midi of mine and improved it as much as I could. You can find it here.

There's something missing, but I can't determine what. I also tried to have some kind of chorus, but had no success with that... And I hate the ending.

This is not meant to be for a game or a song.

[Jakerpot]

i liked it  it could be good for a turn based RPG boss fight what program you used? I also liked the end, but yes, for use on an adveture game, i don`t see any future, but as your intention isn`t this, you should be happy for your work 

[Paper Carnival]

Thank you I used Guitar Pro.

Now that summer is here, I'm going to try and write real songs with lyrics and everything.

[Jakerpot]

Cool  I used Guitar Pro 5 Trial to learn tabs, i think i will buy it to create songs