New Background - The Gents

[Stupot]

Here's my latest background I've been working on.Ã,  You'll notice there isn't a toilet in the cubicle, I have a very specific reason for that so don't worry.



Any helpful comments will be gratefully received.

[Nikolas]

To start of your technique and the BG is lovely as is.

however, somehow I tend to try ot be realistic in my comments and there are a few things that bother me in that sense:

The floor, looks more like grass, than actuall toilet floor...
The uper wall looks almost the same as the floor
and
the window looks like it's a continuation of the wall outside. There is not shadow and it's leaving the impression that there is no space...

Suggestiong (by no means don't follow then, they're just suggestions ):
Make the floor different than the wall. Make it a different colour, and if you want to have mould, have it at that shade, but not at the wall (where there is little reason to exist in the first place).

Find some way to add ashadow in the window, so that it shows that the bricks are actually further away, than they seem right now...

I particularly like the heavy, thick lines you're using.

[Medical Waste]

The fixtures look much more realistic then the rest of the background. The tiles for instance, should probably not be seperated by such dark lines, unless the stuff holding it to the wall (can't remember the name!) is black. Actually I think taking away all the dark lines would look better. Nice background though.

[Afflict]

Medical Waste has a point. The fixtures looked rendered. The rest of the scene drawn, maybe just render the whole scene? And getting rid of the black lines would add to the scene. You can have either realistic or cartoon graphics both just don't work  (this mixed anyway) Retro scope works out quite nice though.

The worst part of the dark lines is definitely the part of the window and the wall meeting it's a really thick dark line there. 

To be perfectly honest I don't like the floor or the wall neither the window or the weird dirt outside on the wall it looks like it actually in the foreground, and I think its supposed to be on the window 

The window the wall thickness doesn't look consistent.

Lastly the roof is completely plain compared to wall and floor that doesn't match