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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Akatosh on Sat 16/06/2007 16:55:28

Title: 5 Days A Sauerkraut!
Post by: Akatosh on Sat 16/06/2007 16:55:28
(http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a23/FAMILIAR_QUEST/sauertitle.png)

The result of boredom, writer's block and boredom... so I've drawn a bit DeFoe Quadrology (or whatever it's officially called) parody stuff: A background [= background edit] here, a few characters there. You can see them all in the title screen above. So, what do you think of them?
Title: Re: 5 Days A Sauerkraut!
Post by: Buckethead on Sat 16/06/2007 18:35:47
lol Akantosh, those are pretty funny. I'm wondering about what you are planning on doing with them  :)
Title: Re: 5 Days A Sauerkraut!
Post by: Saberteeth on Sat 16/06/2007 19:16:26
It's nice but a quick note on the girls hair: it's not outlined like the rest of the characters(A thin black line is present with the other dudes, but not with her). Otherwise, I like your style. Simple and effective.  :)
Title: Re: 5 Days A Sauerkraut!
Post by: Jon on Sat 16/06/2007 20:11:51
Brilliant Akatosh! Very funny indeed. Are you planning to make a game with them?
Title: Re: 5 Days A Sauerkraut!
Post by: FSi++ on Sun 17/06/2007 09:53:10
I'd made girl's hair like men's hairs: with thick (but yellow) line...
Nah, just let me show you...

(http://www.fileupyours.com/files/94024/Photo%20Gallery/sauerfemme.png)
(a quick draft)

Or at least make your outline (I noticed you actually had one only when I started to paint over it) more, er, distinguishable, right now it's very easy to miss.
Title: Re: 5 Days A Sauerkraut!
Post by: Retroid on Sun 17/06/2007 10:18:05
Ha ha ha. Cool picture. I hope it'll end up in a real deal game.

Quote from: FSi on Sun 17/06/2007 09:53:10
I'd made girl's hair like men's hairs: with thick (but yellow) line...

The outline of the girl's hair is as thick as the outline of the man's hair (the one with the black hair). I think Akatosh should go with one consistent outline (the thin one)...

Quote from: FSi on Sun 17/06/2007 09:53:10
Or at least make your outline (I noticed you actually had one only when I started to paint over it) more, er, distinguishable, right now it's very easy to miss.

I agree with this. Keep the thickness of the existing outline, but make it more visible by using a darker colour, or whatever... 'cause it would look a little bit better if you would notice the outline... But it doesn't matter that much, it's still looking good.