below is a sprite that i drew in a hour and i would like some c&c on how i could improve it. although this is the first sprite that i've ever made by myself, please judge it like you'd judge any other sprite.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/y295/skyfire1/somekid.png)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/y295/skyfire1/somekid.png)
x2
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/y295/skyfire1/somekid.png)
x4
Looks okay. You should try adding some shading. He was abit plain too.
There was something in this character that I really liked, so I just couldn't resist to make a quick paintover! :)
(http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/5646/kidspritepaintover0db.gif) (http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/5646/kidspritepaintover0db.gif) (http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/5646/kidspritepaintover0db.gif)
I think it's very good for a first sprite. You just should watch out for double pixelling (pixels side by side). Also, I think sprites look much better without black outlines. But that might be part of your style too.
Nice sprite anyway!
My little quick paintover:
(http://geocities.com/fe2o3_ironoxide/trashbin/somekid_pover.gif)
I didn't count the colours. Like it or not, anyway hope it helps you a bit. ;)
:D /yaaawn!/ Goodnight!
liked pablos paintover better. the kid dont seem like smoking :P
I kinda like the original outlined one. There's nothing really wrong with it. It's got this Hanna Barbera feel to it.
Made some mods to Pablos' generally good version:
(http://www.esseb.com/andail/kidedit.gif)
(http://www.esseb.com/andail/kidedit.gif)
Tried to give him a more relaxed, natural pose.
thanks for the c&c. to be honest, i didn't shade the kid sprite because i didn't know how to do it right.