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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: Femme Stab Mode >:D on Fri 27/06/2003 08:27:34

Title: a picture of a sword
Post by: Femme Stab Mode >:D on Fri 27/06/2003 08:27:34
(http://itkid.com/sword.gif)
Note the angle. I need your judgement. Thanks.
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Mikko on Fri 27/06/2003 09:01:16
My first impression was more dagger than sword, so maybe you could try lenghten the blade.

Otherwise, looks pretty! :)

Oh, and now I realise you might have ment with that "note the angle", that it's pointing out from us. I'm not sure how to improve that, but I thought it was just pointing up-right. Perhaps (if this is the case) you should make it still bit more tilted and make the difference between handle (near "camera") and blade (far from "camera") bigger.

Hope this helps. :)
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Darth Mandarb on Fri 27/06/2003 16:37:17
I like it on first impression.

Maybe (if it's supposed to be pointing away) you could add a slight gradient to the blade as it extends out.

Or, if you're wanting to use less colors, you should do what Mikko suggested and make the bottom of the hilt bigger than the top of the hilt.  It would make it more obvious that the sword is on an angle.

Also, the pommel (I think it's called, the part at the top of the hilt that extends out and up and is gold colored and pointy); I would make the spots where it connects to the hilt a little thicker ... but that's just me being picky!

dm
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Neole on Fri 27/06/2003 20:21:40
The blade has perspective but the handle doesnt. Else its all good!
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: MadReizka on Fri 27/06/2003 22:18:15
I tried too:

(http://personal.inet.fi/koti/arska.huuskonen/images/sword.gif)
(http://personal.inet.fi/koti/arska.huuskonen/images/sword.gif)
Not that good with the swords.
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Miez on Fri 27/06/2003 22:45:26
The gem is very pretty! - nice highlight and shine, very Disney!
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Ishmael on Sat 28/06/2003 14:35:39
I like it! ;)
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: 12431 on Sat 28/06/2003 23:44:31
If you stab someone with that one, that'll be like stabing someone like three times
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Meowster on Sun 29/06/2003 02:32:56
Interesting observation, 12431...

I'd just draw a few points on the handle, in perspective of the blade...

*whips out MS paint*

La di da da da....

(http://www.geocities.com/yufster/e.html)

Okay that sucked. But I'm trying to emphasise the handle, which also sucks. Okay that was a 2 second drawing. Just leave me alone. Okay but the shading and stuff, you get the point. Oh jesus.
Title: Re:a picture of a sword
Post by: Femme Stab Mode >:D on Sun 29/06/2003 08:51:36
Thanks Yufster, that's exactly what I needed! I'll edit the shading now. Thanks

Edit- I'm still acepting sugestions.