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Creative Production => Critics' Lounge => Topic started by: 12431 on Mon 16/02/2004 19:44:21

Title: a posing lady I drew (warning: contains some nudity)
Post by: 12431 on Mon 16/02/2004 19:44:21
well, I am practicing realistic drawing, but I'm not good at it. anywayz, I made this one:
(http://www.2dadventure.com/ags/ferdig.jpg)

I drew the skeleton first in a pose in PSP, and put skin on top. whatever.
just tell me what you think
Title: Re:a posing lady I drew (warning: contains some nudity)
Post by: sp on Mon 16/02/2004 20:22:20
the hair is a mess!!! so is the see-trough thing. try and clean it up a bit because it looks lke she was playing in the dirt!
Title: Re:a posing lady I drew (warning: contains some nudity)
Post by: Scummbuddy on Mon 16/02/2004 22:10:29
i do like the pose shes in. her facial features seem too bright for her skin tone and the overall tone of the picture. i think i would cut back on thier brightness and size. i like the hairstyle, but would like to see it done in a different way. and i would do some sort of plastic sheet filter for the translucent sheet, or something.

overall, its showing your improving artwork over the past couple months,  i know you took a break. keep up the good work, and keep us posted on more art
Title: Re:a posing lady I drew (warning: contains some nudity)
Post by: 12431 on Tue 17/02/2004 14:50:08
thanks  ;D