A sketch (nudity)

[[Cameron]]

Hey guys, been a while since i posted in CL. Anyway, I bought a tablet, I've just been getting used to it, and today I drew this, it's the second thing I've drawn.

The outline of the girl was traced, I nuded her and did the hair/wings/halo freehand. Tell me what you think.

Edit by Andail: Nudity warning in title

[thewalrus]

     I think it looks good. Although I think you need some part of the eye brow showing over the other eye. Also, the pubic hair is a little on the wild side and the breast outlines maybe should be done over.... Anyway, this is a very uneducated opinion.....

[ThreeOhFour]

Her breasts seem to be a little flat - like cardboard cutout breasts. Perhaps if you tried to show depth....

[zewb]

The tits are a bit misshapen and the chin is a little too pointy.

[[Cameron]]

Tried improving shaped of jaw line and breasts, as well as placement of nipples which seemed a little off to me before.

[gypsysnail]

This is good cameron! I like white on black too. One thing I could say is maybe a bit more white shading around under the breasts and a bit of a thin curved line outside the nipple area, not the whole way that it encloses the nipple, just a quarter of a way. And possibly also a thin line down the middle of her chest/tum under her breasts just a short one, not very straight. Also maybe a bit of thickness under part of her nose, just a very tiny bit. I think you have done a good job! Is this for a game?