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Title: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Mouth for war on Mon 25/08/2008 10:57:38
hi! just wanted to share two of our songs with you metalheads :D I hope you'll like it. Oh the first song hasn't been mixed yet by the way if you have any comments about the sound...the other is just roughly mixed...not the final version

http://www.myspace.com/bestdeformed
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Jens on Mon 25/08/2008 19:12:59
well done, considering the genre. do i hear some dissection-influences (black horizons)?
assaults really well mixed, you've got that sound.
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Mazoliin on Mon 25/08/2008 19:39:31
Oh the envy. I've myself tried to make some thrash and it always ends up being crap ::)
But you guys got it. I like it, gives me a sort of Cryptic Slaughter feeling (although more metal).

Näven i vädret och rakt in i moshen!
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Mouth for war on Mon 25/08/2008 21:04:35
Quote from: Mazoliin on Mon 25/08/2008 19:39:31
Näven i vädret och rakt in i moshen!

Ja för fan!!!
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Questionable on Thu 28/08/2008 17:09:56
It feels like the guitar is just looping. The best thrash metal i've heard doesn't sound like the same melody over and over.

The drums are good, they're like a machine driving into you. The singer has it down decent for thrash, he could use more range in his "singing." Otherwise it starts to sound like someone pissed that their dog pissed on the carpet instead of someone trying to express themself.

The only real thing that doesn't make this feel like a song for me is the lack of variation in the guitar. (Interestingly the second song doesn't suffer from this is much, but it's still just the same riff over and over.)
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal) *updated*
Post by: Mouth for war on Fri 29/08/2008 22:35:34
well we can't all think the same hehe...but i don't think it´s that repetitive...only the verse and chorus...thanks for your opinions...more stuff will be added soon ;)
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Mouth for war on Thu 11/09/2008 11:05:45
Added the first song we wrote, recorded entirely in my old apartment. The neighbours were sooo happy :D
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: Mazoliin on Thu 11/09/2008 16:40:44
I can imagine :=

This shit truly kick ass!
Title: Re: A song i've made (thrashmetal)
Post by: The Awesome on Mon 22/09/2008 03:05:10
Let's see...

Stupidly fast tempo...check
brutal guitar riffage...check
can't understand what the singer is saying...check check!!

All the elements needed for a totally brutal metal band!! Hell yeah!!! ;D