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Title: A sprite I made a while ago
Post by: JD on Mon 05/01/2004 22:43:17
Gordon Freeman from Halflife; I think it turned out pretty nice.
I'm just not happy with the head, especially the glasses.

(http://home.quicknet.nl/qn/prive/jjj.dekker/gordon2.gif)
Title: Re:A sprite I made a while ago
Post by: Chicky on Mon 05/01/2004 23:09:49
LMFAO def,

that roxs, yeh summit needs doin ot the head .. but what, i dunno.

have you ever seen half-life 2d, try searching it on google it looks bloody brilliant. But they still havent released it yet  :(

l8rs

-a chicken

*edit, its the eyes, they need a black pupil
Title: Re:A sprite I made a while ago
Post by: Hollister Man on Mon 05/01/2004 23:56:48
LOL, ROTFL, PMPILSGH.  :D

Its the antichris ! (Read it twice  :P)
Title: Re:A sprite I made a while ago
Post by: Scummbuddy on Sat 10/01/2004 16:51:25
Well, I really like it. I can't see anything wrong with it, but yeah, the head doesnt seem to fit in.  Perhaps make the glasses a darker color,all the way to black, and see how that works.

Nice job!
Title: Re:A sprite I made a while ago
Post by: 12431 on Sun 11/01/2004 19:41:38
I know gordon has green eyes, smaller beard, and his hair isn't as close to his face as in your version.. but don't get me wrong! I love it! just thought you wanted a few tips
Title: Re:A sprite I made a while ago
Post by: Penguinx on Tue 13/01/2004 23:59:47
I had a minute so I thought I'd do a quick edit.

(http://www.penguinx.org/gordon.png)

All I did was slim down the facial hair, change the color of the glasses, re-do the shoulder to our left a tad, nip a few pixels on the outside edge of the head, and change the amount of forehead that is visible.

The head seemed kind of flat and it stuck out because the rest of the drawing had so much shadow and depth. Overall, I would increase the contrast of the colors and lose some of the intermediary, transitioning colors.

I like the piece a lot.